Decima99

Why so expensive? he basically spent around 600,000 poke dollars for three TMs. As he said it’s more than ordinary people can earn in a decade. So basically ordinary people can’t afford TMs

He shouldn’t get hurt as he has invincible body.

Honestly for me personally Enid was much better for MC, the contrast between the characters personalities made it more interesting relationship to read. I find MCxWednesday bland and boring.

bro, I have been reading fanfictions since last six years that's why I have built up a standard. These dialogues are cringy to me because I have read so many similarly cheesy dialogues.

The dialogues are cringe af. I physically shuddered reading this.

Why was mc struggling so much against selmy. He should have used his superhuman strength and speed more efficiently rather than engaging in swordplay in which he is clearly at a disadvantage in terms of skill. Honestly he should have backhanded the sword and punched selmy as soon as his iceblade was countered.

I find it hard to believe that the guard isn't a slightest bit suspicious that a man knows who the night watch is but claims to forget his own name.It's not very well thought out author.

So far the story is intriguing, but a couple of things bother me personally. First MCs name, it's like a child google searched for cool names in Greek, but I can live it with since it's not as important to the story. Second, why has the author addressed mc by white haired youth/ youth/ amnesiac etc. so often instead of usual he/him or name. Addressing a character by his characteristics is done rarely usually when pronoun or name is used repeatedly to give variety to writing. It shouldn't be used every time. It's making me cringe a bit. Anyways that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work author.

Are you thinking of movies when you picture Ollivander's shop? He said clearly in book one that "Every Ollivander wand has a core of a powerful magical substance, Mr. Potter. We use unicorn hairs, phoenix tail feathers, and the heartstrings of dragons." We says we use means previous Ollivanders also not I use.

Ollivander only has wands of three cores. How will any special core wand chose the mc, if he doesn't try them.