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Welcome bro, iIhope you will rewrite the beginning chapters too! I'll be rooting for you!
Like genuinely man, I already love this novel just after 5 chapters with beyond bad English, now if you will improve the English, i definitely come back some time later and if the English has improved, iIwill support you in this novel for sure
... Why..?
This novel has massive potential but is all cut by it's horrible grammar. The author needs to hire a proper translator or needs to improve his grammar before posting any chapters. Only after reading 5 chapters i couldn't handle any more all because of the horrible English. I'm leaving this novel for some time and will come back after some time passes and then again read from chapter 1. If the grammar is still the same and the author hasn't rewritten this, I'll unfortunately drop this novel with massive potential. I hope the author takes this seriously.
My god what the frick is this shit, i couldn't even read the first chapter properly, this is beyond bad, it will make a person dumber with bad grammar and story is shit, iIfeel like my iq is halved after just reading the first chapter. I'm outta this novel, never readin this shit again.
The start of your novel seems a bit bad. just randomly having said that he got summoned, mocked, and sent to the abyss, without even properly integrating the elements with proper explanation is really bad. Just throwing it in as if we are supposed to adapt or learn without any medium is absurd. I don't like this novel, that's for sure.
Absolutely amazing novel! The way the author has managed to show the love of the family, their trust, the main characters powers and even the eventual and gradual maturing of his mentality is amazing. I can't seem to find any or many problems with the storytelling and stuff, i just hope that no plotholes will be left and every part will be properly explored and explained in proper rhythm just as you are doing up to chapter 57. I hope you don't drop this great of a novel cuz this has great potential, and I also hope that you don't drop the harem stealer too! both are really good. The only problem is that updates have not been consistent so iIhope the author will figure it out.
Ofc you'd think that, horny guy (i too hope for the same)
Gahd damn thats a fuckn valid argument