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MonkeyOfAle
MonkeyOfAleLv42yr
2022-09-03 01:36

I couldn't stomach reading more than 4 chapters, this is the most mind numbing, generic, cliché fic, the only thing that separates it from most of the garbage on this website is that the writing is decent, by that I mean that the author has a decent grasp on grammar, it is, however, a bland read, the plot is, as usual for this type of fics, forced. The author also decided to paywall 20 advanced chapters on Ptrn and fills the 15k words need to get in the rankings with a copypaste chapter(this brings the 4 to a 3); the main character is the average angsty teenager in the mind of a preteen, and decides to not try and get help of any sort from a government that most likely offers it as most modern governments do for homeless orphaned children, and resorts to vigilantism for no logical reason, it's too soon to say anything about the updating stability but it looks promising, the world background is MHA. This stands above most webnovel fics but wouldn't last very long on any other website where good writing is expected.

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ArthurCE10
ArthurCE10Lv4

Getting help from the government? my guy, are you perhaps talking about the corrupted government that will absolutely use the mc if they became aware of his quirk?

MonkeyOfAle
MonkeyOfAleLv4

My brother un christ, the government thinks he's quirkless, they'll help him quirk or nah.

ArthurCE10:Getting help from the government? my guy, are you perhaps talking about the corrupted government that will absolutely use the mc if they became aware of his quirk?
THOTSLAYER
THOTSLAYERLv4

Don't forget the main character uses the same quirks over and over, he gets very predictable about it, its almost as if the author can't just use superpower wiki lol

MonkeyOfAle
MonkeyOfAleLv4

I didn't read that far, I meant it when I wrote I read 4 chapters.

THOTSLAYER:Don't forget the main character uses the same quirks over and over, he gets very predictable about it, its almost as if the author can't just use superpower wiki lol
THOTSLAYER
THOTSLAYERLv4

my brain ignored that my bad, but the author has the mc use the same set of powers over and over again.

MonkeyOfAle:I didn't read that far, I meant it when I wrote I read 4 chapters.
MonkeyOfAle
MonkeyOfAleLv4

That's not surprising, creativity is most likely not one of his attributes.

THOTSLAYER:my brain ignored that my bad, but the author has the mc use the same set of powers over and over again.
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