The writing quality is good but that's about the only positive I have for this story/fanfic. The MCs motives and reasoning seem nonexistent. The author has to have the mc monologue every time he does something morally ambiguous to justify his actions which shouldn't be a problem but considering that the mc does some out of character things from what was established by the author previously. The quirk New Order isn't even the same as the one stars and stripes had it just "seems" like it. The pacing is weird, it's supposed to be a SI(self insert) but the oc inserted is nowhere to be seen if you wanted a sociopathic mc you should have used one instead of 15 year old with no life experience what so ever.
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