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YaGa
YaGaLv142yr
2022-08-31 21:59

Well, this fic is good, but unrealistic. but let's talk about it's positives first, the writing quality is good and update stability is also good, and has little to no Grammer mistakes . Now it's time to list negatives, the main character's character(of you get what I mean) Is very poorly done, like he is shown to be discriminated and disdained by society but still has unrealistic urge to be "Hero", his previous lifetime doesn't seem to have any impact on his behavior which I find odd, because the longer set of memory's should have overpowered his new life's memory's emotions. As I mentioned Earlier he is shown to be a person who has unrealistic urge to be a hero, but he doesn't have any ideals to live by, no purpose at all, I don't believe that we must pursue a ideal or search for a higher purpose to fulfill our life but Mc just doesn't seem to have any sort of desire other than being hero, he doesn't have any personal thoughts and desires which i find is the main problem with this fic. if you can read it despite all the things I mentioned above, you are free to try.

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xLucqs
xLucqsAuthor

Thanks for the review mate, will take it into account for my future chapters

Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv4

I also want to point out something, new order is a top-class quirk that was kept a secret the US government fearing someone using it for evil purposes (All for one..) and also using it as a secret weapon. Now would happen if such a power was in the hands of a naive kid with no true protection.

Shadowdragon12
Shadowdragon12Lv14

this story is garbage

YaGa
YaGaLv14

we know that, but we must be polite when we review it, ya know maintain some manners.

Shadowdragon12:this story is garbage
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Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

is there romance? if so who is the love intest/s?

xLucqs:Thanks for the review mate, will take it into account for my future chapters
Fates_Bitch
Fates_BitchLv4

so he's kinda like Naruto in being shunned by everyone but still wanting to be some kind of hero

YaGa
YaGaLv14

na, he isn't a complete failure like naruto, he is still better than naruto lol.

Fates_Bitch:so he's kinda like Naruto in being shunned by everyone but still wanting to be some kind of hero
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv5

Nah, he's definitely worse than Naruto. He makes dumb decisions that unless you're another kind of special, then you wouldn't do it.

YaGa:na, he isn't a complete failure like naruto, he is still better than naruto lol.
Avatar_Aang_3443
Avatar_Aang_3443Lv4

The fac you call naruto a failure make your entire argument pointless

YaGa:na, he isn't a complete failure like naruto, he is still better than naruto lol.
Master_Steve
Master_SteveLv4

hello when are you planning on updating the story mha: boost

xLucqs:Thanks for the review mate, will take it into account for my future chapters
Master_Steve
Master_SteveLv4

hello when are you planning on updating the story mha: boost

xLucqs:Thanks for the review mate, will take it into account for my future chapters
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