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2024-03-23 17:00

Here's my one true complaint about this work: the story doesn't seem to have anything in common with the title. They are nearly completely unrelated. Title says he has a cultivation world. With this type of novel, that would mean he owned a world, possibly a small or inner world. He would also likely be the only "human" or sentient being with access to it. Basically, it would be completely his domain. This one in the story? It's anything except that. Up to the point I stopped reading, it seemed more like a planet located in a distant part of the same universe, and practically crawling with a Cultivator..."infestation" (heh! just kidding.) Anyway, he merely teleportation there. He doesn't own it, from what I could see.

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