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raptorfalconLv52yr
2022-09-25 12:26

This story seems to be a slice of life in a cultivation world. Story progress is quite slow and the daily life stuff is just too detailed. By chapter 20 I had already started skipping blocks of text looking for dialogs. By chapter 30 (raws) the skipping got larger and by 40 I could no longer continue. It's just too boring.....

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Fiaran
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I would agree that it is a weak-to-strong cultivation modern novel, more character driven as opposed to action.

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Cringe
CringeLv5

-Translation Quality (4 Stars) Translator clearly put more effort than the rest of other trial reads who just use ML translations. I would’ve given 5 stars if not for some terms being changed between chapters and some sentences that don’t make since since they’re just translated straight from the original Chinese version but it’s very much still readable -Stability of Updates (5 stars) Duh -Story Development (4 stars) I like the story thus far and it has shown promise to be a good novel in the future. The story is more down to earth with the main character being closer to a normal person with a father, mother and and extended family that he’s close to. Plus he’s not ridiculously untalented or talented and he’s not a transmigrator who knows absolutely nothing and he’s more of a person who has lived 17 years in his world. My only worry is that the author just rehashes the “a war has started and I need to do missions” when the MC enters uni. (Oh also there’s no nationalism until chapter 70 something cause that’s the farthest I’ve reached in the raws) -Character Design (3 stars) Very generic. -World Background (3.5 stars) I like how much information the author seems to give about the world however I would’ve liked it to be given more naturally and less through exposition (that sometimes feels like it doesn’t really matter) which will definitely put off a lot of people. -Overall I like this novel but it’s certainly not everyone’s cup of tea but I found significantly better than the rest of the trial reads this time around and obviously a whole lot better than some of the recent previous batches.

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