-Translation Quality (4 Stars) Translator clearly put more effort than the rest of other trial reads who just use ML translations. I would’ve given 5 stars if not for some terms being changed between chapters and some sentences that don’t make since since they’re just translated straight from the original Chinese version but it’s very much still readable -Stability of Updates (5 stars) Duh -Story Development (4 stars) I like the story thus far and it has shown promise to be a good novel in the future. The story is more down to earth with the main character being closer to a normal person with a father, mother and and extended family that he’s close to. Plus he’s not ridiculously untalented or talented and he’s not a transmigrator who knows absolutely nothing and he’s more of a person who has lived 17 years in his world. My only worry is that the author just rehashes the “a war has started and I need to do missions” when the MC enters uni. (Oh also there’s no nationalism until chapter 70 something cause that’s the farthest I’ve reached in the raws) -Character Design (3 stars) Very generic. -World Background (3.5 stars) I like how much information the author seems to give about the world however I would’ve liked it to be given more naturally and less through exposition (that sometimes feels like it doesn’t really matter) which will definitely put off a lot of people. -Overall I like this novel but it’s certainly not everyone’s cup of tea but I found significantly better than the rest of the trial reads this time around and obviously a whole lot better than some of the recent previous batches.
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LIKEMain world where the MC comes from is a Modern cultivation setting that has only one central sect with limited resources but greater knowledge about cultivation realms while the other cultivation world is a traditional cultivation world with spirit stones as the primary currency and monsters roam the wilderness and several sects that all differ in their primary cultivation method and it’s also implied in the raws that the traditional has a higher cultivation limit than the main world but that might just be the MC’s naïveté
so basically it's similar as those parallel world travel novels but with cultivation as the main setting in both worlds