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uflesh940
uflesh940Lv32yr
2022-10-15 15:51

Not sure why everyone is spamming one-stars in the review section, because the story itself is fine. Nothing special here, but it's definitely better than one star.

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Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15

The one star is mostly due to the inconsistency from the author like nerfing his permanent do buff to make it random and letting him learn a level 15 skill at level 12 and changing what skills do without changing the descriptions

Iamaniceperson
IamanicepersonLv3

I'm going to give him a one start review because it's unoriginal Divine Hack System already exists on this platform and it has actually good grammar and spelling and a combat system that actually makes sense

Pronoobity
PronoobityLv15

Divine Hack System and this are not that similar even with respect to novels are just copying each other and their tropes.

Iamaniceperson:I'm going to give him a one start review because it's unoriginal Divine Hack System already exists on this platform and it has actually good grammar and spelling and a combat system that actually makes sense
Cerberus_36
Cerberus_36Lv14

aren't the whole concept of chinese novel is copying each other 😂

Pronoobity:Divine Hack System and this are not that similar even with respect to novels are just copying each other and their tropes.
Pronoobity
PronoobityLv15

Yeah, pretty much

Cerberus_36:aren't the whole concept of chinese novel is copying each other 😂
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

news really. Well that saved me from reading this and being miserable

Slushy_Apollo:The one star is mostly due to the inconsistency from the author like nerfing his permanent do buff to make it random and letting him learn a level 15 skill at level 12 and changing what skills do without changing the descriptions
Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15

Oh it gets much worse in the later chapters. The mc is actually a pushover who ignores people trying to kill him. The girl who looks like she’ll be the female lead for fun joins the group trying to kill him. When he finds out the author wrote his heart turned cold at the betrayal but next chapter they are fine without her even explaining anything or apologizing

DeathLingers:news really. Well that saved me from reading this and being miserable
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

wow with it being like that you can tell this will also be harem trash. concidering thats a major key point for harems a mc that doesn't tell thots to get lost

Slushy_Apollo:Oh it gets much worse in the later chapters. The mc is actually a pushover who ignores people trying to kill him. The girl who looks like she’ll be the female lead for fun joins the group trying to kill him. When he finds out the author wrote his heart turned cold at the betrayal but next chapter they are fine without her even explaining anything or apologizing
William_Claw
William_ClawLv15

its most lilepy an ai chatbot written book, the inconsistencies and things thay vary even paragraphs apart makes it seem like it is either the author purposely messing up to make his book not make sense, or a program regurgitateing mixed up paragraphs from other stories in a set direction, without comprehending what it is actually trying to convey

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