Pronoobity

I’ve already specified, a star designer falls under the category of God of Creation; God of Creation here being multiple entities, e.g. the 50 or so Star Designers are all Gods of Creation. You’re literally making up an argument from nothing. I also put “is SUPPOSED to become” because that is the current end goal of his cultivation system, with god king being too far removed to even think about. Moreover, I didn’t imply he is going to reach that level, but he almost certainly will being the main character of this novel.

Why would you have a problem with it? You specify “THE God of Creation incarnate” while I am specifying “A” God of Creation incarnate. Do you not know what an incarnation is or are you confusing it with reincarnate, being a reincarnation of the original or current God of Creation. So, in the context of this, I am specifying Ves is suppose to, in the future, embody the ideal form of a True God, being a God of Creation based on his profession.

Heyman, read the original comment again.

Mech designers fall under the category of Creation Cultivators, with beings such as Divine Blacksmiths and Star Designers being colloquially referred as Gods of Creation. So 8 months ago, whether I was referring to Ves becoming a Star Designer in the future or Vulcan’s domain being craftsmanship aka creation, when he reaches the True God stage, they are both considered Gods of Creation. The only hiccup is that there is no lore about the God King stage of cultivation, and what it means and what it is called to surpass being a God of Creation.

Very late reply but I CBA to buy priv anymore. Yes, Jannzi’s ace pilot breakthrough was right after the Goliath specimen capture. The Ace Pilot had an ideological difference of banning stolen resonance technology and was manipulated by the Resonance Smith into starting a suicidal breakthrough attempt. Jannzi and apparently many others became inspired.

Lmao I just found this story on another even more scam app called Motonovel. It wants 10 dollars for a week subscription (for this one chapter lmao). Anyways, this story is just a gender swapped version and a scam uploaded to WN. Don’t buy it, report

This has got to be literally the most dog sh** explanation of why things aren’t working. This guy is supposed to become a creation god incarnate, with far beyond superhuman intelligence? This is some terrible writing. Negligence to the highest degree of a possible super weapon. Where tf is Space OSHA?

To reiterate without the spoiler (for possible new readers); Perhaps I was too harsh in my review. I put “worse than mtl slop” but the fact is you are still working on fleshing out world building, and your story has a much higher upper bound than the usual mtl story, just unrealized yet.

The story is well written grammatically and storywise, but it’s flaw is that each clone is its own separate story. There’s little overlap between them and then the main body; each clone could pass as a very bad MTL power fantasy story, but together, there’s very little context for why they should be melded together. The world building for the main body is terrible, lacks context for greater struggle both for foreign (gates) and internal (human vs human) threats, the leveling system isn’t explained well, nor is there any sense of complexity beyond MC, The Association, and MC’s enemy. The title system is more unique, but it’s useless if you go by conventional levels because “first awakeners grinded gates so their level is higher”. The dragon clone has rushed interpersonal ties and gets the usual power fantasy creep. The martial clone is strange because it becomes a completely different type of Martial arts story/blends other fantasy elements with the martial arts story. Beyond 2 clones and main body, the other clones just appear to be disposable trash and meat shields. So basically each world was given 30-40 chapters to flush out 3 different stories. Overall, 2.4 for me. Attempts to be something more but I rate it worse than the usual MTL slop because I know I am reading power fantasy slop when I read MTL (and it’s more cohesive as a story). I hope you fix the things I mentioned by expanding world building or doing something else, I don’t know. In any case, probably won’t check this story for another month at least, and by then I might have forgotten about the story or it may be lost in the sea of meh books in my library. Good luck to you, aspiring writer.

Spelling error in the first sentence of your book is crazy bro.