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Sorenmageofmareth
SorenmageofmarethLv152yr
2022-10-15 01:54

The only thing the story doesn't fail at is grammar. The combat system is non sensical. The plot is full of routines. The cheat is boring and inconsistent. The mc doesn't even remember his skills. The economy is busted. The numbers of the novel don't make sense. He levels up to the se level repeatedly and learn skills with levels he don't have and aren't helpful.

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Jack00
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Exactly 💯! 💯

Mr_N00B
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I gave up 50 chapters.

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