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2023-02-28 08:54

Excellent story with a gripping premise. The Characters, societial rules, and surrounding world are well developed, and the narrative moves at a satisfying pace. No miscommunications or ridiculous misunderstandings and with plenty of action and character development. Can’t wait to continue the journey with this one!

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Thank you for the review. Happy to know you are enjoying it.

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not bad but why don't you give this novel a try THE UNCANNY CANINES

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