well as author I am going give my fanfic 5 stars shamelessly and I am newbie Author and it's my first time writing a fanfic, so please point out mistake i make thank you for reading this
Hit30
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LIKEand the other is where your wrote "he" big Fix those, as for me personaly the sypnosis is very important, if I see some mistakes there I normaly dont even read the story😁 Glad you take other helps and improve your story
Hit30:thanks man,can you tell the mistake i make synopsisimage
Empyrium:and the other is where your wrote "he" big Fix those, as for me personaly the sypnosis is very important, if I see some mistakes there I normaly dont even read the story😁 Glad you take other helps and improve your story
One piece... Not harem 🤣 Seriously, it matters little harem or no harem. The premise is to make a good story. Stats are written in the middle of the chapters, that looks horrible. Write auxiliary chapters for stats, skills... Author, the system you write sucks and worst of all is the personality you gave it. It was better not to give it personality or not to have a system.
Bob_Uchiha_XD:One piece... Not harem 🤣 Seriously, it matters little harem or no harem. The premise is to make a good story. Stats are written in the middle of the chapters, that looks horrible. Write auxiliary chapters for stats, skills... Author, the system you write sucks and worst of all is the personality you gave it. It was better not to give it personality or not to have a system.
Well, it didn't bother me much the stats I actually like to constantly look at the stat for the info, but that could just be me if you do decide to move them, maybe you could try doing at least one stat at the end or the beginning of the chapter. This is just me talking. Really though, I would stick with what you feel comfortable for you and your story.
Hit30:okay thanks for telling me you thoughts 🙂
Lazy_w:Will there be romance? If yes, will the female lead be an OC or an already existing character?
MeepsNewGroove:Is the MC a selfless hero? Like rushing in to save some random without knowing context or without having a plan? Or will he be the type that will kill to protect and save