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DaoistGtoWmx
DaoistGtoWmxLv142yr
2022-12-09 14:01

not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story

Dragon Monarch System

Dark_Bangali
4.0
910 Chs

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Mister_Imaginative
Mister_ImaginativeLv13

It's not everyday I see writers of Bangladesh 🇧🇩 Cheers mate 🍻 Best of Luck :-) I'm proud to be Bangladeshi. I haven't read the book yet but thought a review would help ;-)

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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

WARNING WARNING SIMP MC WHO NEEDS VALIDATION FROM WOMEN WHO ONLY WANT HIM FOR HIS POWER AND STRENGTH I ALMOST PUKED FROM HOW MUCH HE’S OBSESSED WITH WOMEN WHO COULDN’T CARE LESS ABOUT HIM

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hf12881
hf12881Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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SouCheetos
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Reveal spoiler

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Azure_warrior
Azure_warriorLv14

After reading the first 3 chapters, I really love this novel and want to see its future. There is romance, action, kindgombuilding material in this novel.

2yr
WandererMonk
WandererMonkLv11

waah mere sher, really good work here. Liked it a lot. Keep going, it has some darn good potential if properly executed. Loved the concept of it so far.

2yr
ACE_KinGz
ACE_KinGzLv14

There's a huge loophole in this novel .. if his wife truely bound by life contract at least they put something or protect him so they won't die .. it doesn't make sense they only put Julia and butler guy .. They're Goddess from there perspective continent and yet they can't put at least 8 tier .old man. To keep him safe ..

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Maximus_The_Great
Maximus_The_GreatLv4

Guys don't read this s***t because the author is nerfing the mc by making the excuse to make the mc adapt to his current powers. This is such a bull**** since mc has the innate adaptability skill which makes him adapt to his skills faster but still the mc doesn't upgrade his powers due to his underestimation of his own powers even when his retained xp can amount to directly promote him to level 4 star but still won't progress. You know why that is, it's because this author wants to show his extreme hardships and s***t when the mc has the power to destroy anything he has. I say it's a waste of time to see his hardships when he can destroy his problems which op skills. Sigh I really wanted a good kingdom building novel with op mc.

2yr
BL00DY
BL00DYLv4

This book is less ridiculous than the one where MC got 5wifes because his father despised him.... At least here he got 7wifes for normal reasons. Still Author's writing quality is terrible and logic isn't much better than book mentioned before.

2yr
TheNeeD
TheNeeDLv2

After reading half of the chapter, I had one question: Does the author know what pronouns are? In each (well, almost) paragraph, the hero's name is mentioned more than twice. And to protect my eyes, I decided that with this work we are not on the way

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