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BL00DY
BL00DYLv42yr
2022-10-04 06:56

This book is less ridiculous than the one where MC got 5wifes because his father despised him.... At least here he got 7wifes for normal reasons. Still Author's writing quality is terrible and logic isn't much better than book mentioned before.

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Dark_Bangali
Dark_BangaliAuthor

Thank for you harsh and also honest words.

TheFateWeaver
TheFateWeaverLv12

Do not look down upon yourself author.Yes there are plot holes in the story early on but by the time story reaches the goblin war arc, it becomes so interesting and action packed that you start ignoring other flaws.Also you can always go back and change things in the early chapters to make the story more coherent.You can make the contract between Aditya and his wives an non life binding contract but a contract that doesn’t allow them to betray him etc .Just keep going, the story is really good

Dark_Bangali:Thank for you harsh and also honest words.
Ero_Sage
Ero_SageLv11

He can't do major changes to the story after locking the chapter ig.

TheFateWeaver:Do not look down upon yourself author.Yes there are plot holes in the story early on but by the time story reaches the goblin war arc, it becomes so interesting and action packed that you start ignoring other flaws.Also you can always go back and change things in the early chapters to make the story more coherent.You can make the contract between Aditya and his wives an non life binding contract but a contract that doesn’t allow them to betray him etc .Just keep going, the story is really good
Auora78
Auora78Lv4

Your novel has a very big plot loop hole which is the mc who originally was a drunken but suddenly performing as a great king. You know the original body owner was depressed because of his lack of talent so he find pleasure in drinking. He never train hard or try to become great but when mc took over origin's body, the trash prince suddenly turn new leaf. It is obviously suspicious, right? For example, if someone who violently treat his family for years wake up 1 day and behave like saint, what will you think? To change depressed person to normal, we need years of efforts. This is already learn in our school. So, if you had will to write new novels in future, you need to use common sense.

Dark_Bangali:Thank for you harsh and also honest words.
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me

Dark_Bangali:Thank for you harsh and also honest words.
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