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Takeo_Shinji
Takeo_ShinjiLv39mth
2024-03-18 03:08

I enjoyed reading this, which was very surprising, and I'm glad I read it. The way Catnap and Dogday become so protective of Izuku is perfect, and you making it so Izuku forgets to summon more toys is perfect, as I get to be more attached to the Catnap and Dogday characters instead of trying to relate to all the smiling critters.

MHA Quirk: Calling Critters

Jingle303
4.6
51 Chs

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DragoCoffee
DragoCoffeeLv11

very good story, I like the concept of the smiling creatures as a summon, I would like to see if they will have their monster form in the future

9mth

XtrEEm
XtrEEmLv4

Great concept. the smiling critters being summoned is awesome and is extreme interesting quirk idea. the grammar can still be improved but overall is not really that bad. the character and story developement is great tho the time skip seems like mc put no more thought into his quirk. overall great fic cant wait for more. ps. in one chapter you asked for abillity ideas for the other critters so here is my suggestion. tho please add on to it as its barebones Each of the critters has a discription on the wiki. You could make there abilities match that. Ps you could always add on to this or not. Tho these are very barebones ——— Bobby bearhug = her abilities could be something allong the lines like healing as her discription says she his a kind and caring soul. ——— Bubba bubbaphant = he is the brains of the critters so you can have him have something like the rat that is the teacher but stronger ——— Craftycorn = she is the artistic one so something like a crafting ability maybe ——— Dogday = he is the strong and determined leader so maybe a strength and regen ability ——— Hoppy hopscotch = she is the energetic one that can’t stay still and likes to hop. So her ability could be like Jessica jones so superstrengh and speed. ——— Kickingchicken = he is the “cool kid” that doesn’t back down/when he get kicked down he gets right back up. So probably super durability and strength in his legs ——— I got no clue for pickypiggy as I mean her role in the group is to make sure that the group eats healthy. Tho in the game we learn that she might have eaten the other critters and is ver deceptive as she say let’s be friends to the player and right before she says that she is still hungry. After mentioning grilled chicken dear elephant and flayed unicorn.

9mth
WildCat_1
WildCat_1Lv4

This is one of the most interesting concepts and well written fan fic I have read in a while. Keep up the great work.

9mth
Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4

I just wished it wasn’t just the smiling critters

9mth
iDontKnowNom2
iDontKnowNom2Lv2

Well read some chapters it's a good novel, he changes the story of the anime but in a good way. It can be better. Which one gonna be next friend of izuku?(ch 30)

8mth
kDolen
kDolenLv1

I like the story, everything is good so far. (Ch 30) i don't know what im saying but i know what im doing and i know you know what im saying...

8mth
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

While I like it the grammar needs work and I have some problems with a specific chapter. 1. You need to not be so focused on one scene that you forget the world around them exists cause that part in the alleyway doesn’t make sense after a while. How can someone cause so much commotion in broad daylight and not have at least one hero check on what’s going on. There were guns and grenades being used so it doesn’t make sense. And if their main focus was getting izuku out of there so he didn’t get kidnapped then why was dogday kicking a guy in the nuts for hours. But if that was supposed to be minutes then fine but they could’ve taken that chance to run. If you decide to write a scene like this in the future you shouldn’t be so focused on it that you forget the world around them exists and that there are heroes almost everywhere especially since this was done in broad daylight.

9mth
knight_Reaper_
knight_Reaper_Lv13

An interesting story so far as well as an interesting concept. Can’t wait to see future chapters and what the critters can do in the future.

6mth
Watermelon_cat
Watermelon_catLv1

its realy good i like to see what happens next. good work author. i realy dont know anything about smiling critters But I will continue to see what happens

8mth
Watermelon_cat
Watermelon_catLv1

read it. It's a very good idea. It is recommended[img=recommend][img=update] ........................................................................................................

8mth
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