webnovel
DragoCoffee
DragoCoffeeLv111yr
2024-03-07 23:45

very good story, I like the concept of the smiling creatures as a summon, I would like to see if they will have their monster form in the future

Liked by 16 people

LIKE
Replies3
Jingle303
Jingle303Author

Hmm good suggestion. Maybe I'll try using but overall I'll think about it later.

Adramelech
AdramelechLv15

Good so far. Really like the story. Hopefully the Critters have some type of healing factor, cause I’m pretty sure they wouldn’t want Inko or Izuku to see them bleeding out or that they have actual insides instead of cotton or something.

Jingle303:Hmm good suggestion. Maybe I'll try using but overall I'll think about it later.
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

is MC strong or is he weak? like he has a summoning ability for stuffed animals….Assuming you have the stuffed animals abilites does Mc himself have capability’s? Like is he good in CQB or does he rely purely on his summons?

Jingle303:Hmm good suggestion. Maybe I'll try using but overall I'll think about it later.
Other Reviews
XtrEEm
XtrEEmLv4

Great concept. the smiling critters being summoned is awesome and is extreme interesting quirk idea. the grammar can still be improved but overall is not really that bad. the character and story developement is great tho the time skip seems like mc put no more thought into his quirk. overall great fic cant wait for more. ps. in one chapter you asked for abillity ideas for the other critters so here is my suggestion. tho please add on to it as its barebones Each of the critters has a discription on the wiki. You could make there abilities match that. Ps you could always add on to this or not. Tho these are very barebones ——— Bobby bearhug = her abilities could be something allong the lines like healing as her discription says she his a kind and caring soul. ——— Bubba bubbaphant = he is the brains of the critters so you can have him have something like the rat that is the teacher but stronger ——— Craftycorn = she is the artistic one so something like a crafting ability maybe ——— Dogday = he is the strong and determined leader so maybe a strength and regen ability ——— Hoppy hopscotch = she is the energetic one that can’t stay still and likes to hop. So her ability could be like Jessica jones so superstrengh and speed. ——— Kickingchicken = he is the “cool kid” that doesn’t back down/when he get kicked down he gets right back up. So probably super durability and strength in his legs ——— I got no clue for pickypiggy as I mean her role in the group is to make sure that the group eats healthy. Tho in the game we learn that she might have eaten the other critters and is ver deceptive as she say let’s be friends to the player and right before she says that she is still hungry. After mentioning grilled chicken dear elephant and flayed unicorn.

Related Stories

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

He is Monkey D. Luffy, but not the original Monkey D. Luffy, because in this world, that one is Lucy, his blood sister, while he had a peaceful childhood with his other three brothers. They all ended up following different paths since he didn’t have his memories. It was only when he entered a barrel lost at sea to save himself that he finally began to regain all the knowledge he had of this world from his past life. On top of that, he realized he could use this knowledge to his advantage to acquire everything he needed on his adventure. He was given four chances to summon people to start his journey, and more importantly, he finally received his two devil fruits, becoming powerful from the very beginning, with a plan that stretched to the end of his adventure. This story is the adventure of a man called Monkey D. Luffy, with the goal of becoming the emperor of all the seas in the world. For that, he will find the One Piece and destroy the World Government, for they cannot coexist. Be it the Marines, government agents, CP units, Tenryuubito, Holy Knights, Gorosei, or Im, Luffy will walk over a mountain of corpses. “I want you in my crew. Together, we will change the whole world and turn it upside down.” “Hahaha. Don’t worry, I believe in your potential, that's why I want you in my crew.” “My swordsman already fought you and lost. Now let’s see the strength of the world’s greatest swordsman too, right, Yamato? I hope you don’t mind fighting two rookies at once...?” “Awaken... Awaken my power... and destroy all your enemies...” “It’s good to see you after so long, Grandpa... and you, sister.” “Monkey D.? The most dangerous family in the world!” “Isn’t it a beautiful scene? Two Shichibukai and a Vice Admiral as my trophies! Come on, take a good picture and put it on tomorrow’s newspaper cover!” “I declare this kingdom my territory!” “Enel, you’re nothing but an idiot with a god complex. If you’re a god... then I’m a god slayer.” “As you said, Teach, people’s dreams never end! And if people’s dreams never end, why should I stop?” “Doflamingo... Jake... you’re so far from home. I hope you don’t regret this.” "You narcissistic woman, how can someone be so annoying and arrogant?" "What did you say, you damned man?!" "I now declare you husband and wife." "It's time to return to the Blue Sea, after all, we have a world to shake." "CP9? What a disappointment, Sengoku. I want money for them and Doflamingo... I want 2 billion berries at Enies Lobby in a few days." "Enies Lobby was completely destroyed...?" "I've fought Mihawk, Jimbei, Crocodile, Doflamingo, Hancock, and Moria... you're the only one left, Kuma..." "It seems we've finally met, Rayleigh..." "Let's invade Impel Down!" "I came here to find you, sister, it's time for you to join my crew... Joygirl..." "It looks like we've finally arrived at the war." "Sengoku... you tried to arm yourself to execute my brother, so I'll make an example of this Tenryuubito for the whole world." "You can't do this...!" *BANG!* "He actually did it, that bastard...." "Your chains are loose, move your ass and get out of Marineford!!" "Saturn!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!" "I couldn't kill you last time, Akainu... but I'll make sure to do it now." "Destroy the rest of Marineford." "Let's get out of here. When you return, you'll take over this country for your family, Rebecca." "No matter if we're on opposite sides... I will always love you, grandpa." "It's time to start our training." "Let's begin. Now, let's head to the New World, capture territories, and grow our fleet." "Is the entire Straw Hat fleet ready? Now let's head to Wano, after all, we have a war against two Yonkou!" -------------------------------------------- This Fanfic's Schedule for the week, updates on: Monday, Thursday, and Saturday. ----------------------------------------------

RaccoonLeague · Anime & Comics
4.8
493 Chs