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Pythia
PythiaLv122yr
2022-07-12 03:31

In terms or writing and progression this story has great pace and is very enjoyable to read. However, all that was ruined when she had a "Crushed ankle and broken back" That healed magically and she was left with only scars on her finger. Completely moronic, she's now either paralysed for life due to her back being completely broken or cannot move properly. With her ankle... well i shouldn't have to say it should i? If she was truly that powerful to heal such injuries with " I can heal myself with chakra" then she would be a lab experiment for Danzo or Orochimaru. Absolute idiocy that ruined the book for me.

Naruto: Tango with Death

SlyOW
4.7
168 Chs

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Sooooyaaaaa
SooooyaaaaaLv4

This is AU though, some characters are different from the original universe. And kinda agree on the broken back but this is a Naruto where anything is possible as long as you believe the power of talk no jutsu. JK, you should turn off your brain sometimes if you encounter something that should not be possible even in magical worlds lol.

2yr
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NicolasDC
NicolasDCLv1

si lo lees devuelta estoy seguro que no te decepcionara y tambien la historia es media AU y anque estoy de acuerdo con esa parte solo dejalo pasar y disfrutar que no te arrepentís

2yr
Professor_Light
Professor_LightLv5

This also happened to Lee in canon, got his spine broken by fighting gaara needs tsunade to be healed

2yr
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Pythia
PythiaLv12

She healed herself by the power of BS

Professor_Light:This also happened to Lee in canon, got his spine broken by fighting gaara needs tsunade to be healed
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2yr
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Professor_Light
Professor_LightLv5

ummm And Naruto healed a Charcoal?

Pythia:She healed herself by the power of BS
2yr
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Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4

Chakra can literally create life amd other dimensions and you’re complaining about some healing? Smh

1yr
6
Pythia
PythiaLv12

The point is clearly highlighting the author's inconsistency...

Reiya9:Chakra can literally create life amd other dimensions and you’re complaining about some healing? Smh
1yr
PondScum
PondScumLv1

As if Senju healing and Uchiha eyes werent BS

Pythia:She healed herself by the power of BS
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SlyOW
SlyOWAuthor

New story obliges, 5 Star Review from myself. Again, I don't think there's anything wrong with this so I won't make a hypocritical review calling myself shameless or something. As for my own review of the story, I think one of the strong points is originality, I'm not following canon nor am I sending my character in the Second or Third Shinobi War, so it is relatively unique on Webnovel. Without spoiling anything, Sukaina, the main character, will be the same age as Rookie 9, but Minato, Kushina and the Uchiha are alive, resulting in many changes. Just in the first chapter their presence brings a huge change to the world, so my advice is to try it out, at least the first chapter, and not skip past this story because it's the nth Naruto story you saw.

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Qavid
QavidLv14

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)

2yr
Hinto_Hisashi
Hinto_HisashiLv1

I love the protagonist and since she's not a man they don't ask for a harem, it's a relief.....,...........................................................

2yr
JMK
JMKLv13

I really like it. The main character is interesting and nice to read about. It’s also a AU where Minato is still alive so I will look forward to the future devel opment

2yr
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

Writing Quality 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 Updating Stability 5/5 World Background 5/5 A very good Fan-fiction (AU) that doesn't follow canon. Only problem for me is that the Mc is a female and I can't relate to it, but I have no big problem with female mc.

2yr
Sebastym
SebastymLv11

Good. This fanfic is Great.I hope it is not abandoned..............................................................................................................................................................

2yr
ReadinSomeShit
ReadinSomeShitLv14

Definitely one of the better novels. Power development feels right and adds world building in a slight AU. Makes some risks that pay off when other novels copy cannon and get boring

2yr
ara_k
ara_kLv14

10/10 I love this. Everything is just perfect....maybe the chapters could be longer, but I prefer quality over quantity. Great fanfic, everything is super cool.

2yr
Santaslittlehelper
SantaslittlehelperLv13

Every thing about the novel is good Grammar check marking the mc fell real check I donor if u noticed Im bat this but you should unerstand I was kinda putting it off because Im not the biggest fans of female leads but it was good

2yr
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