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SlyOW
SlyOWAuthor2yr
2022-06-24 00:30

New story obliges, 5 Star Review from myself. Again, I don't think there's anything wrong with this so I won't make a hypocritical review calling myself shameless or something. As for my own review of the story, I think one of the strong points is originality, I'm not following canon nor am I sending my character in the Second or Third Shinobi War, so it is relatively unique on Webnovel. Without spoiling anything, Sukaina, the main character, will be the same age as Rookie 9, but Minato, Kushina and the Uchiha are alive, resulting in many changes. Just in the first chapter their presence brings a huge change to the world, so my advice is to try it out, at least the first chapter, and not skip past this story because it's the nth Naruto story you saw.

Naruto: Tango with Death

SlyOW
4.7
168 Chs

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WraithsThighs
WraithsThighsLv3

Will there be romance?

2yr
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WraithsThighs
WraithsThighsLv3

you should add a Female Lead tag too, or maybe put it in the description at least, you could've even mentioned it here. It kind of seems like you're trying to hide the gender of your mc lol

2yr
14
SlyOW
SlyOWAuthor

I'm still not sure about the romance, I'm hesitating. And I didn't add the Female Lead tag because I didn't really see a point to it.

WraithsThighs:you should add a Female Lead tag too, or maybe put it in the description at least, you could've even mentioned it here. It kind of seems like you're trying to hide the gender of your mc lol
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2yr
adeadlegend
adeadlegendLv10

Not everyone likes the main characters of women for the reason that they cannot associate themselves with a woman, because most readers are men.

SlyOW:I'm still not sure about the romance, I'm hesitating. And I didn't add the Female Lead tag because I didn't really see a point to it.
2yr
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WraithsThighs
WraithsThighsLv3

having a female lead is a hit or miss thing in novels, some people will not read them, while some will. Just saying you could make it easier for people lol, but I guess reading the first chapter is just as easy. Anyway, looking forward to more chapters.

SlyOW:I'm still not sure about the romance, I'm hesitating. And I didn't add the Female Lead tag because I didn't really see a point to it.
2yr
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aman10
aman10Lv4

not my cup of tea bcs it's fem lead

2yr
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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

If you do, do romance, I suggest doing Yuri. As personally (as I’m a man) I don’t particularly enjoy reading a straight romance from the female’s perspective.

SlyOW:I'm still not sure about the romance, I'm hesitating. And I didn't add the Female Lead tag because I didn't really see a point to it.
2yr
9
Leylin_Bash
Leylin_BashLv1

No Yuri

ArtoriaPendragon_:If you do, do romance, I suggest doing Yuri. As personally (as I’m a man) I don’t particularly enjoy reading a straight romance from the female’s perspective.
2yr
5
SwanDive
SwanDiveLv2

I agree. I don’t wanna read about mc getting dcked down

ArtoriaPendragon_:If you do, do romance, I suggest doing Yuri. As personally (as I’m a man) I don’t particularly enjoy reading a straight romance from the female’s perspective.
2yr
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True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4

You would assume if there were romance it would be between a male and a female. Correct?! What were you applying?! Care to explain?

WraithsThighs:you should add a Female Lead tag too, or maybe put it in the description at least, you could've even mentioned it here. It kind of seems like you're trying to hide the gender of your mc lol
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2yr
Acl_grafix
Acl_grafixLv4

you really should honestly, based on the ratings (even though that's not really helpful) I was looking forward to reading this, but I do not like reading FMC novels simply because I can't relate and thus can't enjoy the story fully, so to help people like myself to not get disappointed by finding out in the story itself it's easier to say it in the synopsis or tags so we don't waste our time and idiots don't dump 1 star reviews cause FMC

SlyOW:I'm still not sure about the romance, I'm hesitating. And I didn't add the Female Lead tag because I didn't really see a point to it.
2yr
3
SlyOW
SlyOWAuthor

But the story is in the female lead section...

Acl_grafix:you really should honestly, based on the ratings (even though that's not really helpful) I was looking forward to reading this, but I do not like reading FMC novels simply because I can't relate and thus can't enjoy the story fully, so to help people like myself to not get disappointed by finding out in the story itself it's easier to say it in the synopsis or tags so we don't waste our time and idiots don't dump 1 star reviews cause FMC
2yr
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Acl_grafix
Acl_grafixLv4

it may be, but for people who go through browse > fanfic > recently updated it does not have the option to choose male or female lead sections, and nowhere on the novel page does it show what section the fic is in aside from 'anime & comics'

SlyOW:But the story is in the female lead section...
2yr
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Reimoss
ReimossLv14

You should because this novel turned from nice to garbage when I found the mc is a girl. bye freak

SlyOW:I'm still not sure about the romance, I'm hesitating. And I didn't add the Female Lead tag because I didn't really see a point to it.
2yr
2
WistRal
WistRalLv4

There are so many yuri fics on this site, let us who dont want yuri have this one at the very least, im sick of yuri to a stupid degree

SwanDive:I agree. I don’t wanna read about mc getting dcked down
2yr
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Gabriel_Menard
Gabriel_MenardLv1

Can't read reviews without the app. What's the name of your story on fanfiction.net and what's your nickname? I really like your story and I will be faithful even on another platform

2yr
HellKing
HellKingLv4

*you. I made a typo at the first line 😂

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2yr
Knavez_Nilfheimr
Knavez_NilfheimrLv1

No actually go add female protagonist tag so it would be removed from the male lead section.

2yr
Unknown_Stranger22
Unknown_Stranger22Lv3

No romance is best romance

2yr
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Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5

who is the Love interest

2yr
Other Reviews
Qavid
QavidLv14

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)

2yr

Hinto_Hisashi
Hinto_HisashiLv1

I love the protagonist and since she's not a man they don't ask for a harem, it's a relief.....,...........................................................

2yr
Pythia
PythiaLv12

In terms or writing and progression this story has great pace and is very enjoyable to read. However, all that was ruined when she had a "Crushed ankle and broken back" That healed magically and she was left with only scars on her finger. Completely moronic, she's now either paralysed for life due to her back being completely broken or cannot move properly. With her ankle... well i shouldn't have to say it should i? If she was truly that powerful to heal such injuries with " I can heal myself with chakra" then she would be a lab experiment for Danzo or Orochimaru. Absolute idiocy that ruined the book for me.

2yr
JMK
JMKLv13

I really like it. The main character is interesting and nice to read about. It’s also a AU where Minato is still alive so I will look forward to the future devel opment

2yr
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

Writing Quality 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 Updating Stability 5/5 World Background 5/5 A very good Fan-fiction (AU) that doesn't follow canon. Only problem for me is that the Mc is a female and I can't relate to it, but I have no big problem with female mc.

2yr
Sebastym
SebastymLv11

Good. This fanfic is Great.I hope it is not abandoned..............................................................................................................................................................

2yr
ReadinSomeShit
ReadinSomeShitLv14

Definitely one of the better novels. Power development feels right and adds world building in a slight AU. Makes some risks that pay off when other novels copy cannon and get boring

2yr
ara_k
ara_kLv14

10/10 I love this. Everything is just perfect....maybe the chapters could be longer, but I prefer quality over quantity. Great fanfic, everything is super cool.

2yr
Santaslittlehelper
SantaslittlehelperLv13

Every thing about the novel is good Grammar check marking the mc fell real check I donor if u noticed Im bat this but you should unerstand I was kinda putting it off because Im not the biggest fans of female leads but it was good

2yr
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