It sort has a unique premise, but that is about it. The character flow is terrible, too many other fanfiction concepts were implemented and some how the Mc can control Naruto's mindscape to some degree. Overall, if it reworked and some events are spaced or rewritten better. It would probably be worth reading. Such as interaction with Mc and Kurama (It be better if they had actually interactions instead watching anime or manga all the time.), Rushing events such as getting rid of Danzo (Don't know if he actually dead or somehow will return, but either way it was too rushed.), or turning Naruto to the dark side (really not needed). In fact, it would probably be a bit better during the start instead the Mc being sealed in Naruto. Kurama chakra latched onto him so when he gained a body he also had part of Kurama apart of him forming a jinchuuriki yet not.
Liked by 21 people
LIKE
No replies. Be the first!
