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Zekril
ZekrilLv42yr
2022-06-23 16:37

For me the concept is bad the ff mc is nothing but just like a battery of naruto no adventure for himself he just watch naruto story where he use his brain so mhee Not for me

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AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

Agreed how can he even be called mc if he is just observer

Osborn123
Osborn123Lv1

Haven't read it, but if it's as you say then indeed it is a waste of time. A mc that is not really a mc and can't do much? Meh...

RainySand
RainySandLv4

writer wants it that way with madaras memories + library of heavens path he should be able to escape easy trying to seal me

Zekril
ZekrilLv4

Nope the Author said "FOR THE PLOT" even it doesn't make sense

RainySand:writer wants it that way with madaras memories + library of heavens path he should be able to escape easy trying to seal me
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VoteRat
VoteRatLv4

You wrote this review when there was a max of 12 chapters. Need I say more.

KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

so he doesn't do anything for 12 chapters? i thought it would only be that way for 6 chaps or less, thanks for the heads up imma skip this trash.

VoteRat:You wrote this review when there was a max of 12 chapters. Need I say more.
VoteRat
VoteRatLv4

No, he doesn't just do nothing for 12 chapters, even id agree that that would be trash.

KING_IN_YELLOW:so he doesn't do anything for 12 chapters? i thought it would only be that way for 6 chaps or less, thanks for the heads up imma skip this trash.
AzureFluteFan2
AzureFluteFan2Lv4

Abayomi_Atoyegbe
Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv14

If you know what library of heaven's path can do then you wouldn't be saying that, with the library of heaven's path he can easily get out by analysing the seal, analyse transformation jutsu to create a body for himself.

Zekril:Nope the Author said "FOR THE PLOT" even it doesn't make sense
Cindy_Davis_5782
Cindy_Davis_5782Lv1

Yeah

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