For me the concept is bad the ff mc is nothing but just like a battery of naruto no adventure for himself he just watch naruto story where he use his brain so mhee Not for me

This is very, very bad! I don't really have a problem with the MC being a teacher for Naruto, what I have problems with are the changes made to the world of Naruto for no reason. Like the third Hokage is openly talking about Naruto being his weapon (at most it would be the village's weapon). Or the civilian children being in the know about the Kyuubi but not the shinobi ones or Naruto himself... Or that in the first week of academy Sakura is already worse then when she was on team 7 with her fangirling. And even Sasuke isn't spared calling Naruto Dobe the first time they meet, even if Dobe is the name Naruto gained by being the worst graduate... And there are many more things that don't make sense...

As the first to review this hidden gem, I just want to say this; please don't drop this. I'm very interested in how Naruto will develop as a character now that he's influenced by the MC. Also, this is the first time I see this kind of novel where the MC is in the mind of Naruto, and their mentor-student/big brother-little brother relationship is a big plus in my book since it's clear that the MC cares about Naruto and is not manipulating him. Good work, and I'm looking forward to more.

It sort has a unique premise, but that is about it. The character flow is terrible, too many other fanfiction concepts were implemented and some how the Mc can control Naruto's mindscape to some degree. Overall, if it reworked and some events are spaced or rewritten better. It would probably be worth reading. Such as interaction with Mc and Kurama (It be better if they had actually interactions instead watching anime or manga all the time.), Rushing events such as getting rid of Danzo (Don't know if he actually dead or somehow will return, but either way it was too rushed.), or turning Naruto to the dark side (really not needed). In fact, it would probably be a bit better during the start instead the Mc being sealed in Naruto. Kurama chakra latched onto him so when he gained a body he also had part of Kurama apart of him forming a jinchuuriki yet not.

Thanks for making this! It's awesome! Wasn't expecting such a good story at all. Pretty rare concept too, you don't find too many fics of the mc actually being the mentor for og hero, especially without them becoming OP themselves and breaking the balance. Nice twist with the AU too. Refreshing to see a dark Danzo/Hiruzen done right. Love that you kept everyone's personalities close to original and just changed them enough to fit the twist. Tastefully done! Overall, great story! More please!

Continue please, its awesome story. Its first time then i see a story of this kind.

Decent novel. Unique take on the ff. Never seen this before. This young master approves. Sincerely, I, your father Solicitations

53 chapters in and the ‘mc’ still doesn’t have a body for himself. Author is basically just sticking to canon with small changes here and there. Everyone in the comments keep asking the author to give him a body but nope still just same old same old Naruto.

considering the setting it would have been more appropriate if author made Kurma a female and gave mc some way to leave Naruto without harming him, so yeah this are the obvious plot hole According to me especially the kurma being a male, cause the whole thing feels like gay love