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uflesh940
uflesh940Lv32yr
2022-09-02 23:54

It's decent, but honestly rather uninteresting. Also, I dislike the MC. He just follows the systems orders all the time, instead of doing things of his own initiative. Also, he's upset about being rich. Poor guy, I'm sure all the readers feel sympathetic.

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jasper_saber
jasper_saberLv4

😉 feel with you bro

Juto
JutoLv14

I take it by your comment you did not read far or if you did you basically just skimmed as the main character does not just casually listen to the system biggest credible points based off spinning money or his products that he came through the system but it doesn't count if we just casually use it without purpose or if he over uses it just to spend it so you have to have to use it in a reasonable manner to get system points as for listening to the system it gets random missions where he has the option to accept or not there is no punishment from not accepting he just won't get the potential reward and if he does just accept he just has to complete the mission with it normally just wondering a specific item in the regional manner within a certain period of time and if he feels he just get points taken from him it's not damage to him so if you find the mission that he doesn't like he can totally not do it so he's not just casually following the system you can use those points to upgrade his attribute or upgrade his techniques but she does not have to do missions if he doesn't want to as you can also get points just by squandering currency in his products the regular way it's just not as faster doing missions you obviously didn't read it fully because he clearly said that he was bored of being rich not that he didn't want to be rich or he can care that he was rich in his past life he was already a second generation son he wanted something different this life he wanted to focus on cultivation cuz this was to finish your world but he was crippled and he was handed the system although it also hasn't spending money it gives him a chance to cultivate so why not and that you can tell he got someone to casually provoke people and he barely goes to heavily retaliate unless someone seriously tries to step on him so I'm sorry I can't agree with your review try reading it again if you ever did

Juto
JutoLv14

sorry for the grammar I'm using speak to text on my phone I'm not going to bother fixing it so I'll give you an overview of what I said so basically go read it again and and stop putting self-defining tags on the MC

Juto:I take it by your comment you did not read far or if you did you basically just skimmed as the main character does not just casually listen to the system biggest credible points based off spinning money or his products that he came through the system but it doesn't count if we just casually use it without purpose or if he over uses it just to spend it so you have to have to use it in a reasonable manner to get system points as for listening to the system it gets random missions where he has the option to accept or not there is no punishment from not accepting he just won't get the potential reward and if he does just accept he just has to complete the mission with it normally just wondering a specific item in the regional manner within a certain period of time and if he feels he just get points taken from him it's not damage to him so if you find the mission that he doesn't like he can totally not do it so he's not just casually following the system you can use those points to upgrade his attribute or upgrade his techniques but she does not have to do missions if he doesn't want to as you can also get points just by squandering currency in his products the regular way it's just not as faster doing missions you obviously didn't read it fully because he clearly said that he was bored of being rich not that he didn't want to be rich or he can care that he was rich in his past life he was already a second generation son he wanted something different this life he wanted to focus on cultivation cuz this was to finish your world but he was crippled and he was handed the system although it also hasn't spending money it gives him a chance to cultivate so why not and that you can tell he got someone to casually provoke people and he barely goes to heavily retaliate unless someone seriously tries to step on him so I'm sorry I can't agree with your review try reading it again if you ever did
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

Yeah ugh I just love being poor 😍

EpithetEnjoyer
EpithetEnjoyerLv1

tf does this all mean

Juto:I take it by your comment you did not read far or if you did you basically just skimmed as the main character does not just casually listen to the system biggest credible points based off spinning money or his products that he came through the system but it doesn't count if we just casually use it without purpose or if he over uses it just to spend it so you have to have to use it in a reasonable manner to get system points as for listening to the system it gets random missions where he has the option to accept or not there is no punishment from not accepting he just won't get the potential reward and if he does just accept he just has to complete the mission with it normally just wondering a specific item in the regional manner within a certain period of time and if he feels he just get points taken from him it's not damage to him so if you find the mission that he doesn't like he can totally not do it so he's not just casually following the system you can use those points to upgrade his attribute or upgrade his techniques but she does not have to do missions if he doesn't want to as you can also get points just by squandering currency in his products the regular way it's just not as faster doing missions you obviously didn't read it fully because he clearly said that he was bored of being rich not that he didn't want to be rich or he can care that he was rich in his past life he was already a second generation son he wanted something different this life he wanted to focus on cultivation cuz this was to finish your world but he was crippled and he was handed the system although it also hasn't spending money it gives him a chance to cultivate so why not and that you can tell he got someone to casually provoke people and he barely goes to heavily retaliate unless someone seriously tries to step on him so I'm sorry I can't agree with your review try reading it again if you ever did
Juto
JutoLv14

Read the novel first, then come back and read this you would have a better understanding I am basically talking about how the Mc ability work and how he reacts to the system coming into his life.

EpithetEnjoyer:tf does this all mean
Drago_idc
Drago_idcLv11

That’s one of the longest run-on sentences I’ve seen.

Juto:I take it by your comment you did not read far or if you did you basically just skimmed as the main character does not just casually listen to the system biggest credible points based off spinning money or his products that he came through the system but it doesn't count if we just casually use it without purpose or if he over uses it just to spend it so you have to have to use it in a reasonable manner to get system points as for listening to the system it gets random missions where he has the option to accept or not there is no punishment from not accepting he just won't get the potential reward and if he does just accept he just has to complete the mission with it normally just wondering a specific item in the regional manner within a certain period of time and if he feels he just get points taken from him it's not damage to him so if you find the mission that he doesn't like he can totally not do it so he's not just casually following the system you can use those points to upgrade his attribute or upgrade his techniques but she does not have to do missions if he doesn't want to as you can also get points just by squandering currency in his products the regular way it's just not as faster doing missions you obviously didn't read it fully because he clearly said that he was bored of being rich not that he didn't want to be rich or he can care that he was rich in his past life he was already a second generation son he wanted something different this life he wanted to focus on cultivation cuz this was to finish your world but he was crippled and he was handed the system although it also hasn't spending money it gives him a chance to cultivate so why not and that you can tell he got someone to casually provoke people and he barely goes to heavily retaliate unless someone seriously tries to step on him so I'm sorry I can't agree with your review try reading it again if you ever did
Juto
JutoLv14

well what do you expect I not a author plus I use the voice to text function on my phone so it basically exactly what I said word for word I didn't bother editing it.

Drago_idc:That’s one of the longest run-on sentences I’ve seen.
Glend_David
Glend_DavidLv1

is this harem btw?

Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

rant

Juto:I take it by your comment you did not read far or if you did you basically just skimmed as the main character does not just casually listen to the system biggest credible points based off spinning money or his products that he came through the system but it doesn't count if we just casually use it without purpose or if he over uses it just to spend it so you have to have to use it in a reasonable manner to get system points as for listening to the system it gets random missions where he has the option to accept or not there is no punishment from not accepting he just won't get the potential reward and if he does just accept he just has to complete the mission with it normally just wondering a specific item in the regional manner within a certain period of time and if he feels he just get points taken from him it's not damage to him so if you find the mission that he doesn't like he can totally not do it so he's not just casually following the system you can use those points to upgrade his attribute or upgrade his techniques but she does not have to do missions if he doesn't want to as you can also get points just by squandering currency in his products the regular way it's just not as faster doing missions you obviously didn't read it fully because he clearly said that he was bored of being rich not that he didn't want to be rich or he can care that he was rich in his past life he was already a second generation son he wanted something different this life he wanted to focus on cultivation cuz this was to finish your world but he was crippled and he was handed the system although it also hasn't spending money it gives him a chance to cultivate so why not and that you can tell he got someone to casually provoke people and he barely goes to heavily retaliate unless someone seriously tries to step on him so I'm sorry I can't agree with your review try reading it again if you ever did
shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1

did u find out?

Glend_David:is this harem btw?
ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13

Poor guy, you have no reading comprehension

Aztec_Azazel
Aztec_AzazelLv13

your synopsis is awful

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