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Bierbart
BierbartLv142yr
2023-01-05 02:47

Dont know if the author deletes bad reviews or... Writing quality is good and updates are consistent so far. story development was interesting until shortly after meeting carol. The whole hypocrisy play with getting her kidnapped and then going "woo me... i could have prevented that. Poor carol feel bad and i have to suffer living with that but all for the greater good" would make dumbledore fans proud. Add to that a rather random Adoption and spoiling said daughter with mostly slice of live elements derailed it a lot. Dunno if it will get better again but currently at chapter 24 i guess i will have to drop it. characters seem rather linear and simple with rather rushed character interactions and the relationshipdynamic. No problem if relationships may develop fast and you dont have to wait 100k words for some romance or friendship bit currently the character development is at most slightly above the love at first sight lets marry trope. Might work with mind control ina slightly darker work but here its just random

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Can't agree more

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Dragonblaze
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A MCU x Strike the Blood fic. A never been done before concept, at least as far as I'm concerned. Moreover, the writing style is good and not in script style, which automatically makes this better than 95% of fics in Webnovel. Keep up the good work, Author, and keep the chapters coming.👍

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DaddyDavo
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dialogue looks like it was created by an anti social teenager who has never had a real conversation.

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Klillo
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Reveal spoiler

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Absolute_Qlipoth
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Im the first review................. ....

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Diluc_Gunnhildr
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The story more slice of life than action, too bad for fanfic marvel Thumbs down ,👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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LastGod
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Why does every op mc want to be a evil or anti hero in fanfic. You dont got to be a golden hero. But there ain't no reason to become a criminal kingpin. That kind of thing just gets super annoying after awhile the grey anti hero, evil, my justice is justice character is so played out.

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Brent_6064
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I'm but the harem tag is stopping me from reading your story. harem is a concept which is both unethical and barbaric type of romance. stop with these kinds of Chinese wuxia bs.

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George_Vasiliu
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MC gets OP as fk power then does nothing except play house in Marvel... MC gets OP as fk power then does nothing except play house in Marvel...

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