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2023-06-17 06:58

It's my personal opinion so don't take any offense. The novel is very well written and close to zero grammar mistakes. The world background didn't change much from original marvel or at least not yet so I will only give one star as I think the there should be a butterfly effect considering that the Mc is from a fairly wealthy family that should have quite some influence on the world with every action it does. Mc is typical "I just got my powers but at least I know what they do" - guy. He trains them but seldomly uses them which is quite sad considering the power he has. It's also quite a shame that he didn't came into contact with the marvel vampires. About the story. The only thing he does is going around and f**k his women. There's also a little bit about the world but not really much. His family affection is a nuisance after some time as I think that it is too much and the story doesn't progress. About giving the characters a background. It's a nice idea and I don't really mind but it's unreasonable after some time. Just do it in 20 chapters and that's it. There's no need to span the entire beginning in 100+ chapters. If you wanted to give them a background do it somehow in moderation. I also don't get it why he doesn't create more vampires but instead creates super soldiers. Now the only important information is, that he has three wives (maybe 4 if you count ophelia), has three children (for which I personally hoped that there would finally be a male as the sole male character seems to be the mc). He is a king of a country and subdued some kree people. He does almost nothing except for getting women and doing them and also playing with his daughters. It's the first time I saw such a mix stb+marvel but somehow the implementation could've been far better and it's too slow paced.

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sry Mate If there is something wrong. I wrote this comment after 4 months of Reading so I cant remember auch small details

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