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Astrea_AureusLv34mth
2024-08-13 01:33

I've read up to Chapter 515 and I think my review is quite informative. The writing quality is great, minimal grammatical errors, good use of dialogues and exposition, etc. The story started really great, probably 5 stars, but the later chapters only seems like there's really no conflict. If the MC is gone for days or months, nothing really happens. His family just shrugs and goes on with their day. No dilemma, no drama, no questioning, really nothing at all. The MC also just appears on every setting where most times feels like he doesn't belong there and was only really present to get power ups or showcasing his superiority to everyone else. The powers are good but I think there are too much. MC has creative use of his abilities, however, his opponents feels downplayed a lot of times in order to be defeated, sometimes with little difficulty, even though they are actually really up the food chain. Curbstomp moments are very repetitive. There's a lot of "Oh, you want to fight me? There is no fight. I will only dodge all your attacks with spidey sense and use magic to attack you without you landing even a single hit and be defeated no sweat. Now I go home with new power up I took from you." Updates seems to be consistent. A lot of chapters to read so that's a plus. Also, No Harem, so that's RESPECT to the author. TLDR: Good story, mid execution, all over the place, OP MC. Overall, average but highly readable and enjoyable. Recommends this to anyone.

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Sam0207
Sam0207Lv4

A good and concise review. And I agree with it too. Nowadays the world hopping is getting boring and just took the fun of it. Also, the story was good til the DC arc. I mean I liked the DC arc. After that it went downhill 😅.

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