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ArifuretaForever
ArifuretaForeverLv42yr
2022-06-20 01:12

I love your stories. Even if you haven't finished them yet. Who cares. So long as you write what you want and have fun doing it who cares. Also ignore the haters. This is a site for us to write and enjoy ourselves. So continue the good work, and of course nice job choosing Spider-man. Always a favorite

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

AlienWarlord
4.6
720 Chs

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AlienWarlord
AlienWarlordAuthor

Thanks, Im going to try to finish this one tho. I think I can do it.

2yr
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Ophelia_
Ophelia_Lv1

The community has to have more people like you, seriously Like, some people just want to have fun and share their ideas, even if it isn't incomplete, cause they aren't professional writers or smth Ur comment, at least for me, its giving me the will to return to write some ideas that i've putting in the box for so long Keep this way, i'm pretty sure that ur comment doesn't only helped this history author, but every single people that was affraid of keeping writing and not ending it, like me :D

2yr
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Adem_Thomas
Adem_ThomasLv2

Upvote, Plus its hard to write.

Ophelia_:The community has to have more people like you, seriously Like, some people just want to have fun and share their ideas, even if it isn't incomplete, cause they aren't professional writers or smth Ur comment, at least for me, its giving me the will to return to write some ideas that i've putting in the box for so long Keep this way, i'm pretty sure that ur comment doesn't only helped this history author, but every single people that was affraid of keeping writing and not ending it, like me :D
2yr
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BryndenRivers
BryndenRiversLv13

You should not be proud of leaving things unfinished. One or 2 stories you lose interest in is totally normal and expected. But this author NEVER finishes, which means they're fickle and their enthusiasm to finish a story can turn on a dime... I wouldn't be surprised if they dropped this tomorrow.

Ophelia_:The community has to have more people like you, seriously Like, some people just want to have fun and share their ideas, even if it isn't incomplete, cause they aren't professional writers or smth Ur comment, at least for me, its giving me the will to return to write some ideas that i've putting in the box for so long Keep this way, i'm pretty sure that ur comment doesn't only helped this history author, but every single people that was affraid of keeping writing and not ending it, like me :D
2yr
2
Axzile
AxzileLv14

I've read a few chapters for review and it's good. no annoying grammar errors and understandable sentences. I don't mind 1 woman relationship/lover and no harem. I just wish you choose the more pretty and sexy woman in marvel universe instead of zendaya character. I don't hate her character but I'm a MILF/Onee-san/Mature/Thick/Busty/Oppai lover so........... anyway, cause of that I can't write a review otherwise it will lower your ratings and leave a bad taste in my consciousness.

AlienWarlord:Thanks, Im going to try to finish this one tho. I think I can do it.
2yr
Melaet
MelaetLv13

Offence taken by all with less than F cup….

Axzile:I've read a few chapters for review and it's good. no annoying grammar errors and understandable sentences. I don't mind 1 woman relationship/lover and no harem. I just wish you choose the more pretty and sexy woman in marvel universe instead of zendaya character. I don't hate her character but I'm a MILF/Onee-san/Mature/Thick/Busty/Oppai lover so........... anyway, cause of that I can't write a review otherwise it will lower your ratings and leave a bad taste in my consciousness.
1yr
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ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4

Lol 😂 Well the beginning was kinda fun. But later on it got super boring spiderman/ peter lost the charm when he basically became wish granting genie. I mean he and MJ were not even out of high school and they are having a daughter(AI one) Everything is going super easy for the guy. I mean spiderman is about struggle and intelligence. How peter finds balance in life as a hero and student. Here he is in the suit most of the time.

Melaet:Offence taken by all with less than F cup….
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1yr
D_Sama
D_SamaLv4

Have you thought about continuing Voldemort's story, or are you just going to abandon it?

AlienWarlord:Thanks, Im going to try to finish this one tho. I think I can do it.
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LoyalCultivator
LoyalCultivatorLv4

so far amazing im a little biase as this is one of my fav authors and i love spieman but i seriously think that everyone should ayt least guve it a try anyway this book is amazing lol

2yr

_Bruh
_BruhLv13

Like every other spiderman fanfic on this site It's a good way to waste time though if you have nothing else to do

2yr
Pclerk
PclerkLv14

The writing quality is definitely great. Few mistakes are noticed and easy to understand. There are updates almost every day. The story development follows the movies sometimes to closely… in other-words, it’s just the movie storyline for the MCU. This isn’t bad but it’s not the authors story. The part that is the authors is the Spider-Man in the story. It feels decent at the start but as the story goes on it feels more rushed and starts leaving more holes. The character design sticks closely to original characters at times but others it’s missing that essence. An an example is Tony Stark, the author tries to maintain his playful curiosity and lack of thinking of consequences. It comes off as more like a person who was slow to develop rather than an irresponsible adult. The development around Spider-Man is a little odd but fits a business approach I guess. The world background is good and you see descriptions and events around the realms, BUT it’s not the authors world at this point, it’s the movies world background. Maybe try to incorporate more of the authors own places… they don’t all have to be movie scripted. Overall a decent story but is missing excitement and the wow factor.

2yr
SaiEr
SaiErLv5

When i see tag no Harem, my face like [img=faceslap] , bro if u read Spiderman comic u Will know spiderman have many lover.............................,

2yr
DucktyMcDuckty
DucktyMcDucktyLv4

A new aleinwarlord fanfic 5stars without even thinking just hope this one is finished but if it didn’t i think we will all have a new high listed spide-man fanfic in our hands

2yr
bringer_of_Dusk
bringer_of_DuskLv2

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2yr
Wei_Lin_6996
Wei_Lin_6996Lv2

mj in all mcu is pretty useless, plus zendaya is not my type, ignore that female role, it would be a fair read

1yr
Unconscious_Truth1
Unconscious_Truth1Lv4

I recommend that you guys read a novel «Self-insert as Spider-man MCU» on Scribblehub. It's very interesting, and the Mc's personality is awesome. He's like a mini-Tony Stark.

2yr
Kratos5628
Kratos5628Lv2

Alright here is my review of this story. I think you should add more originalty to your character. Your charcter gives gary stu vibes to me like everything is going his way. Now don’t get me wrong we all like our mc succeeding after all self insert is a wish fullfillment fantasy but you have to make your charcter work for it. You could have used peter parker’s intellect to give himself powers through science or magic it could have also served as charcter development and world building for the charcter. Instead of the plot device which was genie. It also lacks originality as I previously mentioned. Author is just copy pasting his mc in canon events. He could have used comics as a reference and created challenges for the mc which would have furthered his character development and could have deepened his bonds with other characters in the story. Now my final complaint from this story would be is that mc is too op for his current scenario. I mean we all like op mc that is not the problem the problem is peter is facing street level villians like lizard or octavius while he himself is a planet destroying entity. He is atleast planet level on power scale while he would probably grow more stronger. There are no stakes involved here I could easily predict that mc would curbstomp the villians easily. This is not meant to discourage the author in any way just pointing out thefacts hope author would improve. cheers.

1yr
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