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  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus5 months ago
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    This is one of the better executed fanfiction in this site/app. So if you are looking to read a well-paced, action-oriented, and plot-driven story, this is your cup of tea. My only criticism is the grammar can be improved by correcting spelling errors especially repeating mistakes that ruins the story immersion. Like seriously, who misspells 'their' into 'thier' half a dozen times? You can use grammar checker extension like grammarly or word processing software like microsoft word, or even Google Docs that can highlight the spelling mistakes. Anyway, if you can ignore that then you can enjoy the story.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus6 months ago
    Posted

    The author did a good job with the premise of this story. But Midoriya is just too out of character. If he was just going to act all edgy, the author should've just made an OC at that point. Who in their right mind, especially a "mature man" undresses and changes in front of strangers on the first day of school? Yeah, he might be influenced by Kakashi or something but Kakashi does not act that way as well. Overall, I'm out of here so read this ff if ya'll can stomach cringe and edgy mc.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus6 months ago
    Commented

    Gojo may have lost to Sukuna but he went out smiling and satisfied while Sukuna was coping and ugly asf. All good tho cuz the trio is back and Yuta can still be saved, hopefully. Yuji is still the goat he descales Sukuna from Megumi. Hard asf mthrfkr

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus6 months ago
    Commented

    This has interesting premise. Also, is Ptah pronounced as Ta? (pic is Ta. What is Ta? Ta is Ta) pls update or Ta will Ta over Ptah. Ta.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus6 months ago
    Posted

    I've read up to Chapter 515 and I think my review is quite informative. The writing quality is great, minimal grammatical errors, good use of dialogues and exposition, etc. The story started really great, probably 5 stars, but the later chapters only seems like there's really no conflict. If the MC is gone for days or months, nothing really happens. His family just shrugs and goes on with their day. No dilemma, no drama, no questioning, really nothing at all. The MC also just appears on every setting where most times feels like he doesn't belong there and was only really present to get power ups or showcasing his superiority to everyone else. The powers are good but I think there are too much. MC has creative use of his abilities, however, his opponents feels downplayed a lot of times in order to be defeated, sometimes with little difficulty, even though they are actually really up the food chain. Curbstomp moments are very repetitive. There's a lot of "Oh, you want to fight me? There is no fight. I will only dodge all your attacks with spidey sense and use magic to attack you without you landing even a single hit and be defeated no sweat. Now I go home with new power up I took from you." Updates seems to be consistent. A lot of chapters to read so that's a plus. Also, No Harem, so that's RESPECT to the author. TLDR: Good story, mid execution, all over the place, OP MC. Overall, average but highly readable and enjoyable. Recommends this to anyone.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus7 months ago
    Posted

    A well constructed story. The author managed to balance an overpowered character with the universe while being loyal to the qualities the character have and still have original qualities that separates them from their counterpart. The pacing can be quite rushed at times but it's an understandable compromise to get to the story's more important setting/s. Overall, it is better than 99% of the stories in this site.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus9 months ago
    Commented

    Woah woah woah Mr. Author, calm down with your sadistic tendency like Gege(derogatory). Do you really think Uro can handle Miwa? Sky Manipulation? What's that? Yeah, Simple Domain. Domain Expansion? Right on, Simple Domain? "Dragon Scales, Repulsion, Paired Falling Stars-" "Simple Domain, Draw". She's unstoppable, unfair, OVERWHELMING. She's in Shinjuku, she jumps in, grabs Sukuna by the throat, "I guess this is the end. Simple Domain." Sukuna sheds tears, "Huh, what is this?" was the last thing he said. Suk/una got Simple Domain'ed. The End. Truly the Jujutsu Kaisen of all time.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus10 months ago
    Commented

    I'm from the future. I liked the part where Mahoraga said "Nah, I'd adapt." and started adapting everywhere. He then opened his domain and Naohiro shrinks in fear. "Stand proud, Naohiro. You were strong.". Truly an adaptation of all time.

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus10 months ago
    Commented

    aint't no way the meme is here

  • Astrea_Aureus
    Astrea_Aureus10 months ago
    Commented

    "a certain 18-year-old non-misogynist appears before me." the 18-year-old non-misogynist be like: