ghast_shooter66

The best way to describe the mc is frustrating. He is so indecisive and annoying it make reading the story boring. More than once after joining the body sect he bring up how his master would have killed him if he didn’t join but then says how he isn’t that bad( he says this to separate people on more the one occasion). At a certain part of the story his biological dad bring two people to kill him he ends up beating them up. His dad than basically said “ do you think that’s all I got” and start to charge something up and the mc wait for him to do while talking trash. The thing he was charging up was basically something to help him escape and as he is doing the mc watch as the guy that tried to kill him and the whole point of his revenge just runs away. At that point I just stopped just wanted to stop but I pulled through and kept reading only for the author to pull some heavenly ranking from somewhere and make the mc second in the ranking and wang dong first.( I think he did this because he made the mc to op and had to boost everyone to even out) at the point I had to stop might pick it up later.

The story is good but it has no spacing between paragraphs which makes it annoying to read.

i was scrolling through my library looking for something to reread to pass the time. When I saw this story updated I did a massive double take. It's good to have you back . Thanks for the chapter.

+1

I’ll take down my current review till I’m caught up and re-review

The story has potential but it feels like your forcing the plot

He has the power of all the pathways at sequence 9 with Superman as backing no shot a group of above average humans and some dude with a shitty way to increase lifespan can threaten him in any real way.

This isn’t Saitama in Baki this is random strong guy in Baki. Saitama was nerfed like crazy to just to drag everything

It is really bad less line a story and more like someone explaining everything. It also seem it was made with ai lots of big words saying the same thing over and over again.

Currently my favorite one piece fan fic