Cough cough... The author is here to shamelessly review his own work, nothing to see here, keep scrolling. >.> Btw, Enel's facial expressions are cracked up

Story was okay until it became absolute garbage once the MC meets the strawhats. Everything was so forced and now his “future” plans are extremely idiotic lol Do not waste your time on this fic.

I'm not gonna lie to you, the reason I decided to read this novel was because it doesn't have a harem. I didn't expect too much out of it, ya know. I thought it was just gonna be a bunch of gibberish with a lot of information dump and with little to no dialogues (or those awkward dialogues), but I was honestly surprised with how well-written it was. There are no grammatical errors (if there were, I missed them) and I actually enjoyed reading it (in other words, I read the available chapters in one sitting.) It's now in my library, and it's one of the novels in which I eagerly look forward to reading new chapters.

the author have thought well while writing the beginning cause the first two chapters were amazing then from the fourth chapter this story became simplictic or simply idiotic for a self proclaimed genius the imagination and creativity of author just vanished after chapter 4 the opening for this was unique purely brilliant for a fanfiction but alas i should have never expected something good cause I have never felt so much disappointment from a fanfiction (sorry for my English is not good )

MC's interaction with the straw hats was so forced and inorganic. The reason why I say the 'interaction' is because I really don't nitpick on the outcome of any scenario, but if the way you reach that outcome is a terrible, then I can't be bothered Other than that give it a read if you have the time, maybe the interaction won't irritate you as much as me.

The development of the story revolves around Luffy, he is the main character of the fanfic because the supposed main character is a fanboy of Luffy. In the first few chapters MC meets the "straw hat" crew. Furthermore, he tells them and other characters that he is a reincarnation, specifically stating that this is not his body. Since he met Luffy it could be seen that MC is Luffy's SiMP, which could be considered something... *cough* gay *cough*. MC joins the navy, faking his identity but... Luffy and all his crew know who he is. MC lets Nami go with the sky island gold, tells Robin about the stone; and the worst of all is that MC and author claim that he is a genius.

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My first impression of this fanfic was good at first, but everything changed when he decided to join the marines to learn their techniques.He should have practiced his devil fruit abilities better instead of starting to learn new techniques. Moreover, he joined the marines where they would become his enemies in the future.And for haki he should be able to find a teacher to help him learn haki in the new world instead of joining the marines.Moreover, MC can hone his fighting skills in the new world because haki is supposed to develop through battle (google translate)

your character looks like a chinese protagonist It is a world of adventures because everyone is so obsessed with being a springboard for the protagonists and why do you want to destroy the world government if they do not represent any threat to those who do not want to discover the truth of the world and more in your case that you do not seek anything from the world and why did you send him to the navy to make him strong when you saw that the new generation of sailors can face the strongest pirates

The mc is disappointing I really hate these types of fisc "reborn as" and yet turn out nothing like the original character the story itself is not that bad I just don't like the mc.