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Spc_Monk
Spc_MonkLv52yr
2022-06-14 23:43

alright, quick information for you guys that will read this : 1. mc reincarnate but lost his personal memories 2. multiverse (world hopping)

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Mountain_Dew_98
Mountain_Dew_98Author

not confirmed. only thinking about multiverse travel

Pythia
PythiaLv12

Ah so basically everything is useless... thanks for the heads up :)

Said_Palacio
Said_PalacioLv13

X2

Pythia:Ah so basically everything is useless... thanks for the heads up :)
RebelKid
RebelKidLv14

🙏 . You saved me a lot of time.

Konrad_The_Fourth
Konrad_The_FourthLv4

Nice, I'm about to skip this fic

Mountain_Dew_98:not confirmed. only thinking about multiverse travel
ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

Why is Multiverse considered bad? World hopping is a easy way of making your fanfic not as stale and last longer.

I_Hate_Time_Loops
I_Hate_Time_LoopsLv15

But it also makes all the progress in the story seem pointless. Also most world hopping story do a terrible job at plot development as they never stay in one story long enough for anything to really make sense. They all feel rushed and facepaced. Honestly their not a sing world hopper in this app I consider to be good. The sub genre in and of itself is just bad. Also most of them are Harems, which is another major negative.

ArtoriaPendragon_:Why is Multiverse considered bad? World hopping is a easy way of making your fanfic not as stale and last longer.
ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

Grandpa universe is a Multiverse story with no harem, and it’s one of the best fanfics on this site.

I_Hate_Time_Loops:But it also makes all the progress in the story seem pointless. Also most world hopping story do a terrible job at plot development as they never stay in one story long enough for anything to really make sense. They all feel rushed and facepaced. Honestly their not a sing world hopper in this app I consider to be good. The sub genre in and of itself is just bad. Also most of them are Harems, which is another major negative.
I_Hate_Time_Loops
I_Hate_Time_LoopsLv15

Grandpas Universe is very good initially but even it gets boring and very repetitive. I got bored just before he went to Beserk. It followed the same formula as the harem novels. Just instead of woman he would pick up a ‘child’ or companion.

ArtoriaPendragon_:Grandpa universe is a Multiverse story with no harem, and it’s one of the best fanfics on this site.
ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

Guess it all matters on personal preference, as I enjoy Multiverse fanfics.

I_Hate_Time_Loops:Grandpas Universe is very good initially but even it gets boring and very repetitive. I got bored just before he went to Beserk. It followed the same formula as the harem novels. Just instead of woman he would pick up a ‘child’ or companion.
Agent_Sleepy
Agent_SleepyLv3

yeah but it's done bad most of the time

ArtoriaPendragon_:Why is Multiverse considered bad? World hopping is a easy way of making your fanfic not as stale and last longer.
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Is mc of this novel villain or hero?

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Paradox2000
Paradox2000Lv1

Writing Quality: So far the writing quality is good, I mostly keeps my expectations low for writing quality in fanfics but this one is still better than most fanfics out there. Updates: So far the updates are stable and good, I hope the author makes this consistency Story Development: The story develops very well, from character interactions to the power system, I can't really find some big flaws in this fanfic considering it as a fanfic. Protagonist: Well personally I like this protagonist a lot, most fanfics either makes a ruthless edgelord of a protagonist or a harem seeking horney mfs. The MC of this novel seems more human, he doesn't have some top tier character development but his character from the beginning is well shaped. He loves his family, have enemies, loves and hates while making decisions that makes his less childish but also something someone of his age would do. Side Characters: Since it's a fanfic there isn't much to say about the side characters but most fanfics I've read mostly butcher the personalities of the side characters but this fanfic blends the OC MC into the world perfectly. One thing that I would like to highlight a scene when Momo came to pick up MC for school in her car and MC's sister asked Momo if she likes him for which Momo replied with a straight "No", I like this instance personally because unlike in other fanfics girls would probably blush question their feelings and especially for Momo because most MHA fanfics used the past of Momo having no friends as an excuse to make her dumb and not realize the difference between the feelings of love and friendship however in this fanfic that particular instance shows that Momo picks the MC up for school because she considers him a friend while also being mature enough to differentiate between the feelings of love and friendship and her deciding who she wants to be with. My issues with it: I don't have some major issues with this fanfic but I'm gonna list some of them 1. I want the novel to add some of it's own plot to it instead of following the entire plot of MHA 2. I wanted the MC to use his resource realm more, he mostly uses it to extract DNAs, I wants him to be more creative with it and have some new abilities for him or pull out a noble phantasm or something. 3. I need some fight scenes for Hana and I also need some interactions between Hana and her friends who left her because she didn't had any quirk.

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