I_Hate_Time_Loops

How is it too fast paced?

I like the story, and I know it’s early on, but I would like to see it delve more into the geopolitics of the world. Like would countries be in an uproar? Entire economies and ways of life gone in months. Also, people have been very passive towards MC and his rise. Knowing the western countries I feel like a price would’ve been put on his head the moment they found out he was black. Still loving the story just feels like things are too calm in the world (even though they have access to the VR world and knowing what it means) and should be more chaotic.

Personally, I’m not a super fan of Harems

I plan on having Mc be vast majority of chapters or at least the people around him But there is one arc I’m thinking about where MC isn’t the main perspective for sometime since what he’s doing isn’t the most interesting but is important.

Not really, all cities are on the sea. Control of sea trade can choke an economy and the free cities are gonna think thrice before attacking Westeros for either side. Also, Seafoam isn’t useless on land, just less effective and more vulnerable against Fire Dragons, at her current size. She is still growing larger and will be humongous. The dance is more than 20 year out, if we follow cannon, plenty of time for growth. Even at her current size she is still a force on land.

I do have some ideas tho

I actually have no idea who he is gonna marry at the moment

lol, that’s an incredibly low bar. Majority of people clear it with ease.

That’s kinda the point. Seafoam while still deadly on land, is not in her element. Therefore, she is severely limited in her speed. She stands little chance, in her younger years at least, against a flying dragon.

Incredibly easy to get tho. Like maybe too easy.