uhhhhh who is saying this book is elite? This book is bad. Like really bad. Don't read this book if you want logic, consistency, character growth, a good plot. In it's current state it's really weak. I donno if this is spoilers since it's literally the first 5 chapters but he very first plot point is that the MC gets accepted into the holy church for being the youngest mage to awaken and have a compatibility with light. The head priest of the church who is accepting him as his disciple decides not to give him a guard or a trinket to save his life or anything for that matter. We then learn there is a Head priest of the village that the MC lives in who has a son who also happened to awaken with light compatibility at the same time but he's a lil old so not so cool. The head Priest of the entire church says nope I'm not gonna accept him in the church he has to go the long way to get into the church. The problem with this is that we immediately after this fact learn how rare light users are.... so why didn't the head priest accept him? This leads to obvious hatred in the sons heart and conflict arises but you see how forced that was? How illogical that whole scenario was? It's like listening to a 5 yo lie to you using 5 yo logic but you are an adult and you can see right through it. Then there's the word padding, it starts right in the beginning. The author will blatantly rewrite but slightly reword sentences that are just reiterating the same thing over and over. Stuff you normally see in novels after they go platinum sometimes.I don't understand how this is ranked so high.... This book reminded me why I like books that have been published and have editors and an author who rereads their own work and makes multiple drafts. I hope the author goes back and rewrites this cause it seems like there's good ideas in there it just feels like whoever wrote this is in elementary school (very rookie writing mistakes). It's like that. I hate leaving bad reviews cause I'd much rather love a book than feel like I've been wasting my time.
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Im not sure how far ahead you read but the story excels in giving you the hype moments. I tend to glance over the nitpicks and enjoy the ride. I think having read 700+ chapters, this novel got me more excited than any other webnovel. The major villain is really good, and other side characters that get introduced after ch 500 are fricking awesome.
You've spent $140 on this novel dude.... I pitty your family, wife, kids anyone who depends on you if this is how you decide what's worth what. I simply said it could be better. I find it ludicrous to pay $140 for this novel in its current state and the fact that a lot of people have and say shit like 'i look past the nit pics' LMAO the things i pointed out aren't nit pics they are immersion killing faults that are glaring. if you can't remember past the last 5 words you read to think back ' wait what the fuck' then that's on you bro. keep spending 100s of dollars on shit.
madtitan:Im not sure how far ahead you read but the story excels in giving you the hype moments. I tend to glance over the nitpicks and enjoy the ride. I think having read 700+ chapters, this novel got me more excited than any other webnovel. The major villain is really good, and other side characters that get introduced after ch 500 are fricking awesome.
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Angelo_9735:You've spent $140 on this novel dude.... I pitty your family, wife, kids anyone who depends on you if this is how you decide what's worth what. I simply said it could be better. I find it ludicrous to pay $140 for this novel in its current state and the fact that a lot of people have and say shit like 'i look past the nit pics' LMAO the things i pointed out aren't nit pics they are immersion killing faults that are glaring. if you can't remember past the last 5 words you read to think back ' wait what the fuck' then that's on you bro. keep spending 100s of dollars on shit.
Bruh People can read almost all of the webnovels on here that are above 200 chapters for fr33.
Angelo_9735:You've spent $140 on this novel dude.... I pitty your family, wife, kids anyone who depends on you if this is how you decide what's worth what. I simply said it could be better. I find it ludicrous to pay $140 for this novel in its current state and the fact that a lot of people have and say shit like 'i look past the nit pics' LMAO the things i pointed out aren't nit pics they are immersion killing faults that are glaring. if you can't remember past the last 5 words you read to think back ' wait what the fuck' then that's on you bro. keep spending 100s of dollars on shit.
are you smoking meth because no you can't. fan fics are free yes but if a novel goes premium which is the goal of all the novels on here you have to pay some as early as chapter 30 and some later at around 60. If you're just going to jump into a conversation at least know what you're talking about or shut up and stay to the side dude.
Bbooo555_Goo111:Bruh People can read almost all of the webnovels on here that are above 200 chapters for fr33.
