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2022-10-09 04:42

just read the first 20 chapters. I don't like how he starts off with the most powerful weapons in the world. The story is progressing too fast with almost no character development. story is very bland and somewhat unoriginal. would not recommend.

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Reacix
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Just going to say this off the bat, but no story, no matter how complex or simple the story is, is considered “original”. For an example, a vampire story, one could have a vampire romance, and try to make it as original as possible, but it won’t be simply because thousands upon thousands of people maybe millions before them have made a vampire romance story. All one can do is make it unique, give the character a unique power, look, and so on that is different from the others. So calling this an unoriginal novel applies to every novel in existence besides the very first novel of said genre and idea.

Christopher_6069
Christopher_6069Lv2

dude i think you made a hasty generalization fallacy there. are you sure there is no original story yet? even until now, I'm searching for a story with accurate 1000 digit power levels with a reasonable and plausible calculation. I've never seen a book where the MC takes thousands of women,each with their dialogues and backgrounds. I've never read a story about multiverses and Omniverses destroyed on a daily basis with consistent power levels. and no story with hundreds of relics. there are others that I didn't mention here. ohhh,combine codes, ciphers, women, relics, godhood in one story. nope. da Vinci code has codes but no harem.

Reacix:Just going to say this off the bat, but no story, no matter how complex or simple the story is, is considered “original”. For an example, a vampire story, one could have a vampire romance, and try to make it as original as possible, but it won’t be simply because thousands upon thousands of people maybe millions before them have made a vampire romance story. All one can do is make it unique, give the character a unique power, look, and so on that is different from the others. So calling this an unoriginal novel applies to every novel in existence besides the very first novel of said genre and idea.
Reacix
ReacixLv14

I suppose I did, but one shouldn’t go into anything thinking it is going to be original. One aspect may be, or it may not as you can’t read or see every single form of media in existence. What is true though is that you can take an unoriginal idea and make it unique.

Christopher_6069:dude i think you made a hasty generalization fallacy there. are you sure there is no original story yet? even until now, I'm searching for a story with accurate 1000 digit power levels with a reasonable and plausible calculation. I've never seen a book where the MC takes thousands of women,each with their dialogues and backgrounds. I've never read a story about multiverses and Omniverses destroyed on a daily basis with consistent power levels. and no story with hundreds of relics. there are others that I didn't mention here. ohhh,combine codes, ciphers, women, relics, godhood in one story. nope. da Vinci code has codes but no harem.
Christopher_6069
Christopher_6069Lv2

yes. you're right.

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