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agentnewbie
agentnewbieLv102yr
2023-01-26 17:09

This is prime example how you do NOT write a good fantasy novel. The story is all over the place. Characters act like a binary code - one second they are admiring mc, then over some non-existant cause they are out to gouge his eyes with a spoon (real people don't act like that, which may be a surprise for author). Mc himself is badly written mary sue. The world is generic and rules are non existant, cause author writes them down ONLY for the mc and any other character to break them in the next paragraph. Oh, also "zoomer language" is not helping. Over all this is worst novel, no, worst piece of media I saw in a LONG time. So am I writing this? Well, you see, this TEXT is somehow 4th place in rating, hence why I picked it up. Turns out, you should never trust in ratings.

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Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

Finally, finally someone said it. This Author really have a talent in writing a awful lot of nothing, just chapter after chapter to summarise a whole lot of nothing, MC with zero brain cells contradicting himself many times, bland side characters, frustrating chapter and story pace, to sum up MC feels like a typical bully who only knows how to bully weak and run when an matching or overpowered competitor shows up. He has no immediate goal whatsoever, with the author just going with the flow and sometimes with zero to none world building, The power scaling of the world is haywire currently with all the rules just waiting to be broken by the MC. sometimes it feels like the Mood of the MC depends on the mood of the author on the perticular day instead of the story flow. well I have up about 30 chapters ago.

Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

*gave up

Blasphemer_reader:Finally, finally someone said it. This Author really have a talent in writing a awful lot of nothing, just chapter after chapter to summarise a whole lot of nothing, MC with zero brain cells contradicting himself many times, bland side characters, frustrating chapter and story pace, to sum up MC feels like a typical bully who only knows how to bully weak and run when an matching or overpowered competitor shows up. He has no immediate goal whatsoever, with the author just going with the flow and sometimes with zero to none world building, The power scaling of the world is haywire currently with all the rules just waiting to be broken by the MC. sometimes it feels like the Mood of the MC depends on the mood of the author on the perticular day instead of the story flow. well I have up about 30 chapters ago.
Mylittledragon
MylittledragonLv3

You gave up too early. Yeah of some of what you said are true but the novel interesting if you had stick around you could have seen

Blasphemer_reader:Finally, finally someone said it. This Author really have a talent in writing a awful lot of nothing, just chapter after chapter to summarise a whole lot of nothing, MC with zero brain cells contradicting himself many times, bland side characters, frustrating chapter and story pace, to sum up MC feels like a typical bully who only knows how to bully weak and run when an matching or overpowered competitor shows up. He has no immediate goal whatsoever, with the author just going with the flow and sometimes with zero to none world building, The power scaling of the world is haywire currently with all the rules just waiting to be broken by the MC. sometimes it feels like the Mood of the MC depends on the mood of the author on the perticular day instead of the story flow. well I have up about 30 chapters ago.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

dude I've read 400 chapters completely, do you still think it's too early? most novel have 800 to 1200 chapter nowadays and I've read potentially 1/3rd of it. don't you think it is the right time to judge.

Mylittledragon:You gave up too early. Yeah of some of what you said are true but the novel interesting if you had stick around you could have seen
Mylittledragon
MylittledragonLv3

. ... Every one has their own likes and hate, i guess

Blasphemer_reader:dude I've read 400 chapters completely, do you still think it's too early? most novel have 800 to 1200 chapter nowadays and I've read potentially 1/3rd of it. don't you think it is the right time to judge.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

I guess? don't tell me you thought everyone have same preference on everything 😂 and for liking this one, I've to say the only positive thing about this novel is the story itself not the way it's being told, I mean even I can imagine all the good, path it can take but I can clearly see the Author can't and if you're gonna ask me what good novel is then here are couple of examples 1. Lord of the mysteries 2. Throne of Magical Arcana 3. Ember ad Infinitum 4. My house of Horrors 5. I shall seal the Heavens 6. Trash count 7. ORV 8. Trafford's trading club 9. Regressor Instruction Manuel 10. Pursuit of truth Do give them a read, btw it's just a small fraction.

Mylittledragon:. ... Every one has their own likes and hate, i guess
Mylittledragon
MylittledragonLv3

So strange that you didn't include Blood warlock by Xienta...

Blasphemer_reader:I guess? don't tell me you thought everyone have same preference on everything 😂 and for liking this one, I've to say the only positive thing about this novel is the story itself not the way it's being told, I mean even I can imagine all the good, path it can take but I can clearly see the Author can't and if you're gonna ask me what good novel is then here are couple of examples 1. Lord of the mysteries 2. Throne of Magical Arcana 3. Ember ad Infinitum 4. My house of Horrors 5. I shall seal the Heavens 6. Trash count 7. ORV 8. Trafford's trading club 9. Regressor Instruction Manuel 10. Pursuit of truth Do give them a read, btw it's just a small fraction.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

it's not even on top 50 dude 🤦 and the novel listing is not by their ranking, it's just a basic start if you wanna see a ranking then I have to include most of the western novel written by H.P Lovecraft, George RR Martin and such.

Mylittledragon:So strange that you didn't include Blood warlock by Xienta...
Mylittledragon
MylittledragonLv3

lol, Why did you mention a pro author like George RR martins?? I'm talking about BloodWarlock: Succubus partners in the apocalypse.

Blasphemer_reader:it's not even on top 50 dude 🤦 and the novel listing is not by their ranking, it's just a basic start if you wanna see a ranking then I have to include most of the western novel written by H.P Lovecraft, George RR Martin and such.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

I'm talking about my novel ranking and if for webnovel then there are many great than warlock also like Er gen, Legion20, Midgard, Warmaisach, MisterImmortal etc.

Mylittledragon:lol, Why did you mention a pro author like George RR martins?? I'm talking about BloodWarlock: Succubus partners in the apocalypse.
watzJ
watzJLv4

Hey, can you recommend any other good authors? I read the ones you posted :)

Blasphemer_reader:I'm talking about my novel ranking and if for webnovel then there are many great than warlock also like Er gen, Legion20, Midgard, Warmaisach, MisterImmortal etc.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

I got a fake job at the academy the frozen player returns deep sea embers supremacy games paragon of sins I became the pope, now what? Blood legacy: new world of doom Terror Infinity Mother of Learning A summoner awakens The regressor and the blind saint Genius detective the first order my iyashikei game SSS- class suicide hunter trash of count family kidnapped dragons embers ad infinitum 48 hours a day Yama Rising Regressor instruction manuel plague doctor Trafford's trading club soul of negary my house of horrors throne of magical arcana I shall seal the heavens these are not by ranking it's just what I can remember now.

watzJ:Hey, can you recommend any other good authors? I read the ones you posted :)
watzJ
watzJLv4

Okay, thanks!

Blasphemer_reader:I got a fake job at the academy the frozen player returns deep sea embers supremacy games paragon of sins I became the pope, now what? Blood legacy: new world of doom Terror Infinity Mother of Learning A summoner awakens The regressor and the blind saint Genius detective the first order my iyashikei game SSS- class suicide hunter trash of count family kidnapped dragons embers ad infinitum 48 hours a day Yama Rising Regressor instruction manuel plague doctor Trafford's trading club soul of negary my house of horrors throne of magical arcana I shall seal the heavens these are not by ranking it's just what I can remember now.
Lotusx78x
Lotusx78xLv3

Weird you did mention Reverend insanity. It easily trumps everything you mentioned.

Lotusx78x
Lotusx78xLv3

By far

Blasphemer_reader:I got a fake job at the academy the frozen player returns deep sea embers supremacy games paragon of sins I became the pope, now what? Blood legacy: new world of doom Terror Infinity Mother of Learning A summoner awakens The regressor and the blind saint Genius detective the first order my iyashikei game SSS- class suicide hunter trash of count family kidnapped dragons embers ad infinitum 48 hours a day Yama Rising Regressor instruction manuel plague doctor Trafford's trading club soul of negary my house of horrors throne of magical arcana I shall seal the heavens these are not by ranking it's just what I can remember now.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

yes it does but not everyone likes it as for my taste I simply forgot to mention it up top cause I already finished it a couple of times and it no longer added to my library

Lotusx78x:Weird you did mention Reverend insanity. It easily trumps everything you mentioned.
OakFlame
OakFlameLv14

good taste

Blasphemer_reader:I guess? don't tell me you thought everyone have same preference on everything 😂 and for liking this one, I've to say the only positive thing about this novel is the story itself not the way it's being told, I mean even I can imagine all the good, path it can take but I can clearly see the Author can't and if you're gonna ask me what good novel is then here are couple of examples 1. Lord of the mysteries 2. Throne of Magical Arcana 3. Ember ad Infinitum 4. My house of Horrors 5. I shall seal the Heavens 6. Trash count 7. ORV 8. Trafford's trading club 9. Regressor Instruction Manuel 10. Pursuit of truth Do give them a read, btw it's just a small fraction.
ChronosMrk1
ChronosMrk1Lv14

I really don't understand the rating on webnovel. This apparently has a writing quality of 4.5/5. Are any of you even real?

Elf_Lover
Elf_LoverLv11

finally I found the comment. I really wanted to thank you for recommending some of the best. these past few months i didn't need to search for a good novel because of you. I just ran out of novels. If you have any new recommendations please share....

Blasphemer_reader:I got a fake job at the academy the frozen player returns deep sea embers supremacy games paragon of sins I became the pope, now what? Blood legacy: new world of doom Terror Infinity Mother of Learning A summoner awakens The regressor and the blind saint Genius detective the first order my iyashikei game SSS- class suicide hunter trash of count family kidnapped dragons embers ad infinitum 48 hours a day Yama Rising Regressor instruction manuel plague doctor Trafford's trading club soul of negary my house of horrors throne of magical arcana I shall seal the heavens these are not by ranking it's just what I can remember now.
Blasphemer_reader
Blasphemer_readerLv15

superhunt by FETI, I Was Mistaken as a Monstrous Genius Actor,plague doctor,legendary moonlight sculpture,soul of Negary,I became pope, now what?

Elf_Lover:finally I found the comment. I really wanted to thank you for recommending some of the best. these past few months i didn't need to search for a good novel because of you. I just ran out of novels. If you have any new recommendations please share....
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