Complimentary first review from the Author: The story is set in a world where magic exists, and each Magical Element has a Holy Church, with the Holy Church of Light being the most influential and strongest. The only element which doesn't have a Sacred Church is the Element of Darkness as it was destroyed, being thought to be the work of the Devil. Since then, all Dark Mages were hunted by the world and killed whenever discovered. In this world, Gabriel wakes up with the Holy Element of Light, but due to circumstances, he wakes up with a second Element, Darkness which brings him at an unexpected crossroads. The story will be an epic filled with mystery, adventure and actions. Please give it a try.

I'm on chapter 83 atm I don't have much to say but good things writing quality is top tier. Updates all the time Story is really good character design is top tier the world-building is good too only thing that would make the novel better is some lemons. ;]

This is prime example how you do NOT write a good fantasy novel. The story is all over the place. Characters act like a binary code - one second they are admiring mc, then over some non-existant cause they are out to gouge his eyes with a spoon (real people don't act like that, which may be a surprise for author). Mc himself is badly written mary sue. The world is generic and rules are non existant, cause author writes them down ONLY for the mc and any other character to break them in the next paragraph. Oh, also "zoomer language" is not helping. Over all this is worst novel, no, worst piece of media I saw in a LONG time. So am I writing this? Well, you see, this TEXT is somehow 4th place in rating, hence why I picked it up. Turns out, you should never trust in ratings.

Development of the 1st arc was horrible, with unnecessary conflicts, and worldbuilding failures. I left the story. he is the enemy of the world and insists on betraying his allies.

The conversation seems so fake and cringe

A strong affiliation towards the light, but pushed into darkness by jealous conspirators. A story that doesn't shy to delve into the ugliness of human societies, told through a visceral depiction of both the good, bad and the ugly. If you've enjoyed DA's other novels, then don't think further and jump into this. You're in for a grand ride.

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A review of a privileged reader: As of right now everything is being lined down by the author perfectly but cons and pros are impossible to avoid Cons : Story development is annoyingly slow! Like before in the tower ark i was reading throughout it with in mind 200+ chapters to read more but now its BAD chapters a not long enough too! Half the chapters even in priest of darkness privilege is just all shitty talking! Update stability is never the same time a day! Tge story is so predictable! Author have a no existence talent of the element of suprise! To hell with this am reading to this point because I believe this guy can catch up of things! LIKE u don't need 2 chapters a day of random nonsense with a chapter so short that there's no progress in plot! A whole chapter was about him dodging holding hands with a girl! I just started a month ago and i been lovin the story but plz at least let us have a meaningful chapter or just do 1 day!!!!

just read the first 20 chapters. I don't like how he starts off with the most powerful weapons in the world. The story is progressing too fast with almost no character development. story is very bland and somewhat unoriginal. would not recommend.