Have A Question? Ask in the comments. As for Harem/Non-harem - Yes, Harem. (read the note below synopsis.) Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.
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LIKEIt's settings are inspired from Overgeared but everything else including the story and the characters are original. Even Overgeared had taken inspiration from its predecessors like Legend Moonlight Sculpture. So I hope you stick around and read it for at least 20-30 chapters before judging it. Happy reading!
Equinox_D:Don't know buh this novel seems like it copied overgeared with a little twist 🤷🏾♂️😂😂💀
Your mc is trash in the early chapters, I mean he behaves so stupid, it hurts me to read it, I thought he was an experienced player, so why does he behave like a total noob? I will read all available chapters, but please tell me.he will get smart and experienced, as he should be from the beginning
I could have easily gone the cool, handsome, dashing and charming main character from the start, but that wouldn't make sense with the backstory that I have in mind. And yes, he'll get a character development, that too would be pretty visible in the upcoming chapters.
Empyrium:Your mc is trash in the early chapters, I mean he behaves so stupid, it hurts me to read it, I thought he was an experienced player, so why does he behave like a total noob? I will read all available chapters, but please tell me.he will get smart and experienced, as he should be from the beginning
I get your point here, and I dont need him handsome or dashing, but he player the game for at least 6 months, and I have the feeling he is a newbie, I read all 26 chapters, later it got a bit better, but I cant seem to like the mc as he is, I expected a veteran player or so, someone who knows how to play the game after months of playing it.
DreamThree:I could have easily gone the cool, handsome, dashing and charming main character from the start, but that wouldn't make sense with the backstory that I have in mind. And yes, he'll get a character development, that too would be pretty visible in the upcoming chapters.
But, it is only my opinion, I read many good comments so you have to do something right👍
DreamThree:I could have easily gone the cool, handsome, dashing and charming main character from the start, but that wouldn't make sense with the backstory that I have in mind. And yes, he'll get a character development, that too would be pretty visible in the upcoming chapters.
No, he's a noob in the game at the start, that's why instead of leveling up like normal players, he was trying to do adventures to seek treasures. One thing I can assure you is that this noobness will go away with time. As you yourself can see, he develops a bit after chapter 20 and will keep on developing. Hope you stick around 😉, happy reading!
Empyrium:I get your point here, and I dont need him handsome or dashing, but he player the game for at least 6 months, and I have the feeling he is a newbie, I read all 26 chapters, later it got a bit better, but I cant seem to like the mc as he is, I expected a veteran player or so, someone who knows how to play the game after months of playing it.
Ah, sorry for my earlier reply. I misunderstood the question for my other novel. For the tycoon part, yes this novel will have a money grubber part to it, but it won't be centred around it. As for superpowers, I can't really say anything as it'll be a spoiler, so read to find out? :)
Akselelator:I would like to know in the real world whether he will have abilities (superpowers) (will he become a tycoon?)