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DreamThreeAuthor2yr
2022-06-12 15:10

Have A Question? Ask in the comments. As for Harem/Non-harem - Yes, Harem. (read the note below synopsis.) Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.

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HumbuubLv4

0 ch/week? what would be the future release spd?

DreamThreeAuthor

It's showing 0ch/d cause it's been less than a week since it's release :)

Humbuub:0 ch/week? what would be the future release spd?
sugar_dannyLv14

Will there be any love interests both in and out of the game?

DreamThreeAuthor

Yes

sugar_danny:Will there be any love interests both in and out of the game?
Aim_zxLv14

Quick question is there NTR i don't mind if the mc steals others but his women mustn't Just wanted to know that before i start reading

DreamThreeAuthor

Uh huh. No there is no NTR.

Aim_zx:Quick question is there NTR i don't mind if the mc steals others but his women mustn't Just wanted to know that before i start reading
Aim_zxLv14

Well thanks i will read this

DreamThree:Uh huh. No there is no NTR.
yb48Lv14

Will there be kingdom building?

Aim_zxLv14

i think yes since it's in the tags

yb48:Will there be kingdom building?
Equinox_DLv14

Don't know buh this novel seems like it copied overgeared with a little twist 🤷🏾‍♂️😂😂💀

DreamThreeAuthor

It's settings are inspired from Overgeared but everything else including the story and the characters are original. Even Overgeared had taken inspiration from its predecessors like Legend Moonlight Sculpture. So I hope you stick around and read it for at least 20-30 chapters before judging it. Happy reading!

Equinox_D:Don't know buh this novel seems like it copied overgeared with a little twist 🤷🏾‍♂️😂😂💀
EmpyriumLv15

Your mc is trash in the early chapters, I mean he behaves so stupid, it hurts me to read it, I thought he was an experienced player, so why does he behave like a total noob? I will read all available chapters, but please tell me.he will get smart and experienced, as he should be from the beginning

DreamThreeAuthor

I could have easily gone the cool, handsome, dashing and charming main character from the start, but that wouldn't make sense with the backstory that I have in mind. And yes, he'll get a character development, that too would be pretty visible in the upcoming chapters.

Empyrium:Your mc is trash in the early chapters, I mean he behaves so stupid, it hurts me to read it, I thought he was an experienced player, so why does he behave like a total noob? I will read all available chapters, but please tell me.he will get smart and experienced, as he should be from the beginning
EmpyriumLv15

I get your point here, and I dont need him handsome or dashing, but he player the game for at least 6 months, and I have the feeling he is a newbie, I read all 26 chapters, later it got a bit better, but I cant seem to like the mc as he is, I expected a veteran player or so, someone who knows how to play the game after months of playing it.

DreamThree:I could have easily gone the cool, handsome, dashing and charming main character from the start, but that wouldn't make sense with the backstory that I have in mind. And yes, he'll get a character development, that too would be pretty visible in the upcoming chapters.
EmpyriumLv15

But, it is only my opinion, I read many good comments so you have to do something right👍

DreamThree:I could have easily gone the cool, handsome, dashing and charming main character from the start, but that wouldn't make sense with the backstory that I have in mind. And yes, he'll get a character development, that too would be pretty visible in the upcoming chapters.
DreamThreeAuthor

No, he's a noob in the game at the start, that's why instead of leveling up like normal players, he was trying to do adventures to seek treasures. One thing I can assure you is that this noobness will go away with time. As you yourself can see, he develops a bit after chapter 20 and will keep on developing. Hope you stick around 😉, happy reading!

Empyrium:I get your point here, and I dont need him handsome or dashing, but he player the game for at least 6 months, and I have the feeling he is a newbie, I read all 26 chapters, later it got a bit better, but I cant seem to like the mc as he is, I expected a veteran player or so, someone who knows how to play the game after months of playing it.
TilexiusLv4

Is the story planned out? How many chapters do you estimate this story will have? From what I read this story sounds extremely promising…🫡

DreamThreeAuthor

yes it's planned out and will go on for at least an year (maybe longer) with 2-3ch/d, each of 2k words.

Tilexius:Is the story planned out? How many chapters do you estimate this story will have? From what I read this story sounds extremely promising…🫡
AkselelatorLv3

I would like to know in the real world whether he will have abilities (superpowers) (will he become a tycoon?)

DreamThreeAuthor

Ah, sorry for my earlier reply. I misunderstood the question for my other novel. For the tycoon part, yes this novel will have a money grubber part to it, but it won't be centred around it. As for superpowers, I can't really say anything as it'll be a spoiler, so read to find out? :)

Akselelator:I would like to know in the real world whether he will have abilities (superpowers) (will he become a tycoon?)
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