I like the story, The Invincible Universe is great and so little used in fics... I just hope we get a little more character development, for example Hela; she only left with the mc after they destroyed her kingdom like It was nothing. Literally, she just left with him and the matter was forgotten, not even if you want there was a moderately romantic interaction. Maybe more character development and a little more invincible universe, the guy had like 500 children and we didn't get to see that she was going to think thragg about so many new Viltrumite. Excuse the bad English, I don't speak it at all. Greetings from Costa Rica.
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