I don't normally review my own stories, but I can't seem to get any reviews that provide more insight into the story than they provide insight into the preferences of the person writing it. First off, it's not my problem if you are disappointed that my writing is so high quality yet I don't write stories that caiter to your precise tastes. That right there addresses the majority of my negative reviews. Content wise, you need to read up to chapter seven to understand the character and why he does what he does. It may come as a shock, but Mark neither apologizes nor rationalizes for his actions both to himself and others. Wild take on a first person story, I know, but you can only understand the character as he acts and interacts with others. A real show don't tell situation that seems to have gone right over a lot of people's heads. And I don't mean to say that I write in such a way that is too difficult to understand for the ungifted mind, not at all. It's just some people have refused to engage enough to look at context clues and foreshadowing and this makes them very angry. One thing to note is that I do not do a great job with the world background situation. I personally don't read fics outside of fandoms I am not a part of, so I was unaware how many people do just that. As such physical descriptions of the characters and settings tend to be sparse and bland. I assumed incorrectly that anyone who didn't remember a specific character would Google him or her, but that would require people to meet me half way, and how dare I assume that people would do that. I am so silly. Last up is an important thing to note, I write with the express purpose to entertain. I think logically about the characters and setting to an almost deconstruction level, and then put my Main Characters through that world with as much good cheer as I can manage. My MC's don't complain and aren't lazy. They engage the setting in pursuit of their goals come what may.

It's not that bad. It's just that this appeals to very specific preferences that I do not have. Namely, overpowered and chad protagonists who are addicted to s*x. The description of the world is also basically abysmal so there's no point in reading this if you don't know what happens in Invincible. That's kind of the point of fanfics, though, so there's nothing wrong with that, but, in this case, the lack of descriptions combined with the rushed storytelling makes an overall bland world background that feels artificial. It's just boring imo.

I really liked the start and thought it would be an interesting story but i was proven wrong. There is no developemnt of the characters in anyway. The story is pretty much im here now so bend to my knee. The whole Flaxan thing while is practical an a very good idea it does not allow for amy growth or for anything interesting to happen. He becomes the ruler like its nothing. I understand he is extremely OP but its so basic an unoriginal. There are some funny moments an even moments i enjoy but it is so heavily outweighed by the other boring writing. I just personally expected more of a story and less of a since im here i win. I hope the author continues writing for people who like it but i am personally out

No need to read it if you have read his other stories if you haven't then you must read the one with the GROGAN on the front to become WOCK to his awesomeness

Perfect. I have been looking for a good invincible SI for so long! Loving it![img=recommend] [img=update]

There is really nothing to complain about this and the author's other stories, they are simply excellent. If there was something annoying is that they are so good and entertaining that they always leave you wanting more. 👌👍😍

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i loved EVERY BIT OF THE 14 chapters i read the mc is super opportunistic and i love it the interactions are believable and the passing is nice, i am loking forword to the DC arc

Fantastic, I love the personality of the MC, I thought he would be the typical moralistic prince... but I was surprised by the path he took. Keep it up.