How does Viserys know it's a broken record? You have to be careful with modern expressions in ancient stories, that one in particular took me out of the immersion of reading. On the other hand I was hoping that Aemon would arrive and find all that mess and decide that some people were a head too tall.

a Lannister perhaps, they were not mentioned again since the rebellion.

Super nervous, how do you name your technique, what would it be in Japanese?... Shinigami or something like that?

Not mermaids, it is more interesting to bother the southerners with their businesses, especially now that the reach is not at its best, and to mess around at sea there are the Greyjoys who are going to get nervous with their victories and are going to want more assaults.

The best way to control the honorable Ned is to go with him to the Tower of Joy and have the nice blade on your neck which means 'Jon Snow' to keep Ned in line.

Man, the pratreon text between paragraphs is very annoying.

Well the MC has had like 20 kids and I don't need the lewds for it, not even with named characters like Elia, maybe doing it with someone important like Cersie or Catelyn would be fun to watch(read).

Just to upset Gildarts, you should marry Canna and be her real son.

Bnha de Einlion, I would read it but knowing the author I imagine that the progression of the plot will be very slow when I give them screen time like all the female cast of the story that will be the MC's harem, if only there were 3 or 4 me I would encourage you to continue the story. Any chance author?

Bro, the notes between chapters are horrible. They totally cut off the immersion when they're short and now yours are unbelievably long. If you could put them in the notes after the chapter, that would be great.

System? It's a big no for me. Bye and good luck.

I like the story, The Invincible Universe is great and so little used in fics... I just hope we get a little more character development, for example Hela; she only left with the mc after they destroyed her kingdom like It was nothing. Literally, she just left with him and the matter was forgotten, not even if you want there was a moderately romantic interaction. Maybe more character development and a little more invincible universe, the guy had like 500 children and we didn't get to see that she was going to think thragg about so many new Viltrumite. Excuse the bad English, I don't speak it at all. Greetings from Costa Rica.

Power Girl and Hala, where did you sign?

The 10-year cooldown didn't just apply to Danzo? because they weren't his eyes and even less he's not even an Uchiha. What's more ... I don't remember a time when it was said that Shisui used Kotoamatsukami against someone, I don't think he used it, so that it is said that the original user has more problems apart from being blind like all MS users .

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Daikokuten, same name of the isshiki technique. I imagine he wrote it before it appeared in Boruto.

That fake, the most broken Uchija and they didn't teach us what super crazy technique their eyes had, ignoring the susano.

I don't remember what Madara's magenkyou technique was

Entonces hay posibilidad de secuestrar a la 18 de esta línea del tiempo ,para fusionarla con la de la línea de tiempo de la que vienen y asi tener una super 18 de waifu? (Por supuesto,super pechos para para super 18)

Felicidades!!! Bien merecido el #1