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DuckLordLv152yr
2022-10-24 15:47

Very good, praying that Noel gets his menories later in the story when he’s the same strength as before. For the sake of the romance I like both character but I don’t like that she knows this whole other side of him.

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GreenvanLv12

What whole other side?

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