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kartik_agarwal
kartik_agarwalLv31yr
2024-03-26 22:51

The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase

System vs Rebirth

Fixten
4.6
1374 Chs

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VaporaFire
VaporaFireLv3

thanks 👍👍👍 i wont continue reading this lols, im just few chs in and mc feels simp and the girl is irritating, i think its best if mc soul also reincarnated and kills the girl instantly when they first met and the title is just for bamboozle. Then mc will become villain and get revenge.

1yr
kartik_agarwal
kartik_agarwalLv3

The story is actually alright. If you find starting chapters enjoyable, do read it

1yr
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

I’m sorry but this review is absolutely trash and it says a lot about you as a person We don’t know why people are joining an organization that’s meant to kill people? It’s been the same even in our world…. Greed, revenge, religious dogma etc. Leave a nation and just go live somewhere else happy go lucky to avoid the criminal organization? Yay! What a great and kind suggestion!

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It_Is_Me_Ttt
It_Is_Me_TttLv4

He was pretty much shunned amongst the nobility, and some people were either against him or wanted to kill him. The way the story was, I would leave the country if it were me. There was literally no need to just suffer himself there. It's different when it's a general thing, but was all about to get rid of him in one way or the other. The said organization also wants him captured or dead. There wasn't any point at that time to stay in that nation. Even his grandad was ready to talk to the King of the other nation to grant him better privilege, of which, the king was willing to accept any requirement as long as MC made his decision to relocate. I haven't continued the book yet as I got very busy. Still somewhere in the 880 ~ 920. But the book is actually nice, and I do admit that there were lots of plot holes.

DaoistArbore:I’m sorry but this review is absolutely trash and it says a lot about you as a person We don’t know why people are joining an organization that’s meant to kill people? It’s been the same even in our world…. Greed, revenge, religious dogma etc. Leave a nation and just go live somewhere else happy go lucky to avoid the criminal organization? Yay! What a great and kind suggestion!
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