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MrNewbie
MrNewbieLv152yr
2022-11-25 21:53

There is absolutely no logic in here, so the family of the mc is exterminated vy the royal family and the stargaze family with a direct implication from anna stargaze the " love interest ", the two met after the girl came back from the future to steal all the opportunities from the mc, and like in the arc of days since they've the mc goes from killing from sight, to her food is really good and she smells nice, i should do what she says and help her. This is bullshi* his family was killed recently yet he somehow is fine with helping the killer. I don't care if in the future we find that she wasn't completely at fault (we even have a memory of the girl where she begs her father to kill all of them and to not leg go of the mc) how can a normal human being do such a thing? if it was my family i wold have no problems in killing entire cities just to harm their killer, yet he helps her? why he dosen't try to stab her in the back while they fight enemies? why he helps her in stealing his opportunities? How can he be such a beta? And at last why does this novel have more than a million views yet only 29 reviews, all of which good?

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Efthee
EftheeLv14

so true my man, I was wondering about that too, I have only read the first 40 chapters, not to mention that the system seems kinda weak, I mean trading points for bottle water...

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Mc is: Simp Beta Dog Typical male protagonist of the Asian novel, where he is always a socialist psychopath with a feminine appearance (femboy) who is super intelligent and also promotes Asian supremacy; however, when the protagonist meets a woman, he behaves more pathetic.

Anup_RyuSenju
Anup_RyuSenjuLv4

don't say asia, idiot, say Chinese or say author name.

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Mc is: Simp Beta Dog Typical male protagonist of the Asian novel, where he is always a socialist psychopath with a feminine appearance (femboy) who is super intelligent and also promotes Asian supremacy; however, when the protagonist meets a woman, he behaves more pathetic.
DaoistatnnJf
DaoistatnnJfLv13

thx for ze warning

saggynut3060
saggynut3060Lv1

looks like someone has some catching up to do

Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

Thank you for telling me 😃

kartik_agarwal
kartik_agarwalLv3

what mrnewbie said here is wrong. there are perfect explanation for why mc started to trust fmc more.

Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429
Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429Lv4

what were the reasons? ...

kartik_agarwal:what mrnewbie said here is wrong. there are perfect explanation for why mc started to trust fmc more.
Yuehai_Yenha
Yuehai_YenhaLv2

𝘧𝘳 𝘴𝘵𝘶𝘱𝘪𝘥 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘺

DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

What even is the point of this review? It’s just a giant self report that you’re subhuman trash. Kill whole cities just to harm someone you hate? No wonder you’re mad that it’s not immediately about being rabid and killing anything that moves. Either you’re an incel or still one of those really really edgy “males” that think it’s super impressive to always be angry. Unironically, if you were transmigrated, you’d be a young master stepping stone for any MC. Reading all of the review again and it’s clear that you are genuinely an incel and a person to simply not be trusted with anything

DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

No reason to give you the reasons because of you believe what this brain addled review says, it’s like you willingly allow yourself to contract a mental disease

Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429:what were the reasons? ...
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ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

It's really good, read it on a whim but it was an unexpected gem, was debating on the rating. The grammar is great, plot is great and characters were great, I say were because... In the beginning you can feel MCs hatred for Anna, you know he hates her, you can feel it even he doesn't say it which it is usually described in internal thoughts At around chapter 66ish, I know and appreciate MC can act like he doesn't hate her to take full advantage of her for whatever "evil schemes" she's trying to pull but you no longer feel the hatred, in fact, MC feels a bit complacent, I don't know if it's because there is less of an internal monologue about how much he can't stand her going on but it feels way different, I know Anna said some BS to throw MC off which he fell for and is contemplating but it seems like his hatred is dying down way too quickly, I mean this girl like he said, gave the execution order essentially, his own words, she is responsible for his family's death, his life as a fallen noble, etc, his hatred seems ...shallow at this point is the best I can describe it, it's just different from when we started off and when he was initially acting Now when he says he wants to kill her, it seems more like...what's the phrase....lip service, yea, words without meaning I'm still gonna keep reading of course, it's a great story, just a bit disappointed at how quickly the hatred is gone after someone is responsible for the death of his entire family and he knows for a fact it was her idea (even if she was being used)

Syphilitis
SyphilitisLv15

Review (325 chapters) An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days. Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and Psychologically No harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forced Definitely no cliché’s and feels extremely fresh I dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done here MC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experience World background is well done and plenty of room for exploration Writing quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing major System/reincarnation is top notch here Character Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10 Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered •Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now. Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph

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