over all i loved they story, its my cup of team as a story goes, really enjoyed Elkes story line my favoret, as well as his inventions. loved Annaliese, and want more of those two as well as annaki. now for the bad if u wanna consder it as such, i dont partcularly like viktoria, and the weired termnalagy, for example when the author refers to a clan as an orgnization, which thros me off a bit and sounds just weried it doesnt flow. but all the other things would be a bit nit picking, and most of them r simply in the begning of the story if u can get passed the first 10 chapters i think u all will really enjoy this story, i loved it so much and wish for more from Elke that i will give his other stories a read.
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LIKEi cant partcularly remember the earler scenes, amd there hasnt been many in the last few hundred chapters, but i think he does a bit more than fade to black, but he doesnt go to much into details i think, so i get what ur saying, for a story that the mcs power is relaiant on dual cultivation, it truly could improve with a lot of more attantion to the lemon secense.
AvidReadrX:Shame it's ftb, skipping the explicit content🙁
I got to chapter 40, but I ended up needing a break at that point because I'm becoming more and more concerned he's going to end up getting entangled with the Frosts issues and end up helping them instead of escaping like he originally wanted to do. I don't really like the Frost family and with the way they treat him I'd much rather the mc have a clean break, but it's looking doubtful. Can you let me know if he ends up siding with them so I know if I should continue reading or not?
Shaq_Fu:nice good luck, its a really nice story, and has good depth, just i recomend u at reast read 30-50 chapters, am sure ul love it.
yeah he does end up helping them. but he also takes his revenge. and he wont stay at the house for much longer.
Sinful_Cyanide:I got to chapter 40, but I ended up needing a break at that point because I'm becoming more and more concerned he's going to end up getting entangled with the Frosts issues and end up helping them instead of escaping like he originally wanted to do. I don't really like the Frost family and with the way they treat him I'd much rather the mc have a clean break, but it's looking doubtful. Can you let me know if he ends up siding with them so I know if I should continue reading or not?
So tell me, who gives up on a novel after just 10 chapters? Even when I'm not particularly fond of the book, I don't give up until I've reached about 50 chapters. As I've already started it, I'm still keen to see if it improves after that isn't that normal behavior that everyone will have ?.
i have no idea why u would reply wiyh what u said, no where did i say i only red 10 chpters in fact i finished this story. but even then what makes what u think correct, where does it say that reading 50 chpters is better than reading 10 and then hating the story. i could say 100, someone can say 5. i droped stories after 1 pargraph, and stories after 100 chapters. so just bc u set ur standards at 50 doesnt make ur standeerds tge correct ones.
IMDOOMED:So tell me, who gives up on a novel after just 10 chapters? Even when I'm not particularly fond of the book, I don't give up until I've reached about 50 chapters. As I've already started it, I'm still keen to see if it improves after that isn't that normal behavior that everyone will have ?.
It's a matter of respect; you don't start a novel to stop it after 10 chapters unless there's a legitimate reason. At the very least, read 20 chapters. In any case, even among my contacts, I haven't encountered anyone who judges after just 10 chapters. 💀
Shaq_Fu:i have no idea why u would reply wiyh what u said, no where did i say i only red 10 chpters in fact i finished this story. but even then what makes what u think correct, where does it say that reading 50 chpters is better than reading 10 and then hating the story. i could say 100, someone can say 5. i droped stories after 1 pargraph, and stories after 100 chapters. so just bc u set ur standards at 50 doesnt make ur standeerds tge correct ones.
u have a misguided idea of respect, respect has nothing to do with how many words u read on a page, or wheather u like something or not. i can respect someone who took the time and put the effort in to put thier idea on a page and write something, and at the same time be honest and respectfull to them by telling them i dont like it, and why i dont like it and give my reasons. and i can also not respect another person who did the same, when thier ideas or belifes put in a story that in my view r immoral distructive and mislead or misguide ppl. respect has nothing to do with how many words i read, i dont owe u respect just simply for u being alife.
IMDOOMED:It's a matter of respect; you don't start a novel to stop it after 10 chapters unless there's a legitimate reason. At the very least, read 20 chapters. In any case, even among my contacts, I haven't encountered anyone who judges after just 10 chapters. 💀
also what u r saying makes no sence where does it stop, is it disrepectfull if i read 1 page and drop it, well how far can u go. 50 chapters, 20 chapters, how about the novels summury. well how about the novels name, how about the movels picture. how about passing by the novel on a shelf is ut disrespectfull to walk into a library and not read every book there? makes no sence i drop it when i know i dont like it, wheather its on page 1 or after 200 chapters.
IMDOOMED:It's a matter of respect; you don't start a novel to stop it after 10 chapters unless there's a legitimate reason. At the very least, read 20 chapters. In any case, even among my contacts, I haven't encountered anyone who judges after just 10 chapters. 💀