Shaq_Fu

at least u did not go for the most annoying grating voice and proformance in movie history, "Am Batman"

this should be a sgin in location

that one's good for seris.

😂😂 thought the gift was indicative, my bad, happy belated birthday.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

if I don't like something I will say it don't worry😂. as I did with the 9th seat. reading so much of this type of novels, a person cant help but develops pet peeves, am sure very one has them. some of mine is when an Mc enters a sect, and uses them without giving any benefits, and leaves them in trouble. a second is the constant revelation of ppl that can do similar things to the mc. for example first academy or sect, no one has 2 affinaties of anything, and the mc has 2, and everyone is shocked and the whole world wants to kill him. later on we find in anew continent or country, that everyone has at least 3 trillion affinaties ant its average. anyways, no worries, am enjoying more than 80% of the story and thats excellent. I can live with 40% lol. no story will be exactly what I want unless I write every word, even Ai cant give me that lol.

ohh am liking the story. I was just pointing out that just walking randomly into another core formation that does what rain does, make it seem as its normal, and that makes the mc just another core formation. had u had this 9th seat be a domain masters who defeated another domain masters of a higher lvl that would have been reasonable. but just to keep having ppl at the same lvl as the mc do better than the mc kinda feel like why do I care about this mc, and why isn't the other guy the mc. I comment with what I like and what I don't, which means I like and care about the story. the moment I don't say what I like or don't like is the moment I don't care about the story. and its just a small thing. again am not complaining, ur story bro, and if u think this is better for it, just don't think too much on my comment 😁👍🫶

so what ur saying is this arena is just a joke, and only covered fear it, and all of the last chapters warning was just for show. bc any random core formation can come here and clean house. or Rhain is just an average core formation, bc there is a lot stronger than him who can rule a lawless land at core formation. or this area is just weaklings bc domain masters here suck. with just one sentence u made this whole adventure mc and area a joke bro.

really what's the point of the last 4 chapters, nothing happened, at least that guy should have been killed. fights that end up in a tie is just a waste of time, and page space, and worse for the reader coins. nothing happened here except mc getting beat up, and treated like a kid, ur allowed to be hunted like a dog, and killed, and ur not even allowed to harm ur hunters.