While the novel quality is good the story is bland as mc let the thing play as they should be in anime.I mean he could kill his father easily.(carbon monoxide kn sleep).he didnot develop air air fruit to full potential.like hydrogen and oxygen blast.or plasma.sound attack .or vaccum.

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The author is quite literally telling a story. With this i mean he relies too much on telling instead of showing. It is one of the worst cases of 'telling-not-showing' I've seen in this site. At least when it comes to grammar things are good enough. But the style is the worst. About the story. MC is an observer of the main plot. He becomes OP quickly and decides to take a backseat role to the events of the manga. It's bland and kinda boring but at least it's something I've never seen before in a fanfic. This is for those who get mad at authors for completely changing the original plot. This author instead barely changes anything. Dialogues are cliche and cringy but there is some personality to the main character and the other characters. Only a tiny bit. But at least they're not complete robots. This is something you read when you don't have absolutely anything better to do. Like most stories in this website. I wouldn't say it is the worst thing I've read here, though. It is middle of the pack. Not the worst but not among the good ones.

Author, with MCs monologues etc., insists making MC seem like a good person, when the person in question left his terminally ill mom with his f'ed up family, in favor of 'guiding' (or let's be honest, he just wants to go on adventures), Sanji, when Sanji himself would've been fine having escaped alone. He's perfectly capable of helping a character ease her pain, or at least be beside her throughout the process, but still chose to leave her to her destiny. This is what plagues most garbage-rated works on this site - Moral inconsistency. These Authors don't know how to properly convey a character's moral compass in a way that's organic, so they supplement it with monologue, etc. instead of actions. It's poor story telling, leading to a disconnect between how the author views their character and how the reader sees them. It's one of the most st-upid, very-in-your-face, mistakes an author can make.

The MC instantly getting along with everyone for no reason, coupled with how annoying his character sounds makes me wanna bleach my eyes with how cringe this trash is. This site needs a delete ASAP rating exactly because garbage like this fanfic exists. Also, the timeline is all over the place, not to mention the writer intentionally mix' it up because, and I qoute, "It's more fun". You know what else is fun, author? Rounding up braindead mollusks like you (who thinks posting your cursed work sounds like a good idea) and burning you all in one giant camp fire. The least you idyeeeets can do is make us people with common sense feel warm for the night.

no reason to read this unless you like recapping the original since nothing will change in the story no reason to read this unless you like recapping the original since nothing will change in the story

im loving your novel even if i wish there were more chapters always a suc.ker for good one piece fics ......................................

Good premise but the mc just follows the crew like a dog, legit just normal one piece with mc tagging along. In the beginning it seemed like mc would go off and do his own thing but nah

this had a good start then it just devolved into a mess that gets annoying...litteraly 99% of this fic is the mc laughing at something not funny...like no plot no nothing just the mc laughing at litteraly nothing funny...