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Luffyloo

Luffyloo

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  • Luffyloo
    Luffylooa day ago
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    The idea of the story is interesting. The execution is a little lacking though. The progression of events doesn't feel smooth and the interactions between characters feels extremely strange.

  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo17 days ago
    Posted

    This story is hilarious. Keep up the good work author

  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo19 days ago
    Posted

    This is a somewhat enjoyable story with OP characters. The AU elements are interesting, but the way the author wrote the MC's mom and her strength make it feel like anything the MC does it controlled by his mother. He feels like a puppet who just follows his mother's every whim. The mother feels more like an MC than the MC unfortunately, and for that reason I'm going to discontinue reading. Thanks for the effort though author!

  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo19 days ago
    Posted

    The story was going pretty well, until the author decided that raping the mc (who is a minor) by the person who raised him is a good development? Not sure about anyone else, but this is just disgusting.

  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo20 days ago
    Posted

    This book isn't really a Naruto story. It's a drama taking place in the Naruto world. A lot of the characters are OOC and there is tons of forced plot to make Naruto do certain things. He is kind of a sandbag for women, just getting pushed around by 5+ women for no apparent reason. There is a lot more I could say, but I don't want to spoil it for anyone who is actually going to read this novel. In my opinion, save yourself the time and skip it though.

  • Luffyloo
    Luffylooa month ago
    Commented

    Doesn't Urashiki kill mc in simulation lol?

  • Luffyloo
    Luffylooa month ago
    Commented

    lame :(

    This book has been deleted.
  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo2 months ago
    Posted

    This is a tough one. I was super hyped for this book based on the title. I really was looking forward to a mob character getting a harem of transcendent yanderes. That being said, our MC in the first 30 chapters is someone who just gets manipulated constantly like a puppet and is ok with it. You drug him? He forgives. Kill him, all cool. I know our character is supposed to have some screws lose, but he's basically a doll for anyone to play with. If it gets better from chapter 30, I won't be reading more to see it. Regardless, thanks for the hard work author :).

  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo3 months ago
    Replied to mahou65534

    When she was young she was apparently very attractive to many people. There are some pics on the wiki I believe if u want to look

  • Luffyloo
    Luffyloo3 months ago
    Posted

    I started reading this with low expectations. It's hilarious. The sheer absurdity of the MC is great. I was laughing the whole time I was reading this. Keep up the good work!