The writing is understandable but there are errors in grammar and syntax. Update don’t appear to have a set or consistent schedule but do occur often enough and usually in groupings. Story development is ok. There are details the author clearly does not know or is unsure about when it comes to American culture, it’s not bad though. Certain aspects of Marvel/DC appear to be off but I think this ties in with the lack of cultural knowledge and feel. Still decent enough to read. The characters feel very basic and and very robotic. They seem to be missing emotional traits. Author attempts to do some world background. Descriptions just don’t go far enough into detail for it to matter. I think as the author writes more, does research, the story will improve. The potential is there but the flaws keep it at an ok level. Give it a try, I can see the story being liked more by other cultures outside North America.
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i thought it will be a negative review only 😅
If you like trash CN urban novels read this. If you like marvel fan fiction, don't. Story is almost totally just classic gang stuff you find in urban novels.
