Sigh, you see... It's translated Chinese work... And before we got to the problem that will make you frustrated, because they whould, it's actually pretty nice read. But there is always but's. It's surprisingly boring. You see, it's was written in a cultivation-like style, when author wants badly to squeze as much chapters as he could. Meaning, he wants at least 1000 of chapters for the book. You could f7cking guess how hard making something intresting with so many chapters in mind on a very limited time. So of course the story is very useless. Gang fights - it's literally template of cultivation stories when people bring problems to mc but he himself, doesn't actually do anything. A free word count. His power growth? Forget it. Even though most of stories takes place in a modern time, we stuck in a world war 2 with mc that literally can't do anything. I whould say that harem is quite nice. Of course mc being pushover in a best Japanese style. At least not so bad, but still... So yeah, if you expect to read something actually intresting,with a progress, with intresting plot - I wouldn't recommend it. Or try to find original novel and use mtl. Because reading slow releasing translation will only leave you in disappointment. In the end, it's probably best Chinese takes on marvel/DC, but it's still pretty dull . That's all... Go away now.

Well I'll change this review for when the story reached 100 chapters, for 10/10 since I don't think this fanfic will disappoint me. (psdt. Captain America will have a little brother 😈😏)

The writing is understandable but there are errors in grammar and syntax. Update don’t appear to have a set or consistent schedule but do occur often enough and usually in groupings. Story development is ok. There are details the author clearly does not know or is unsure about when it comes to American culture, it’s not bad though. Certain aspects of Marvel/DC appear to be off but I think this ties in with the lack of cultural knowledge and feel. Still decent enough to read. The characters feel very basic and and very robotic. They seem to be missing emotional traits. Author attempts to do some world background. Descriptions just don’t go far enough into detail for it to matter. I think as the author writes more, does research, the story will improve. The potential is there but the flaws keep it at an ok level. Give it a try, I can see the story being liked more by other cultures outside North America.

I have no clue what people like this... the only reason it's so long is for the word count

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background I don't know why this fic had such a High rating.. anyway I'm only here lower it so ignore this

Está muy bueno esto, espero que el autor puedo seguir actualizando más capitulos aunque tengas otras novelas que tambien me gustan. ................ ................... ...........

To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!

parece prometedor, veamos como continua...

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