Pclerk

Read up to chapter 302. The writing quality has always been great from the beginning. The issue has come with all other categories. Author has other things going on or is getting bored with writhing the story… I would lean more towards getting bored since other categories have taken a hit. The story has taken a very weird development. Very thing progresses way to fast, lots of different plots occurring all at one time, and it almost feels like no true resolution for any of the events. Character design has taken a huge hit. The MC was written to be more real at the beginning but has changed to a completely generic power fantasy type character. His decisions and personality have taken a hit. Says or thinks one thing but does something completely different. The world descriptions and events have turned bland. There are zero descriptions of the result of event… and no reasons for it making sense. The story has regrettably become a power fantasy god character creation story. Nothing unique or special anymore. Something to read for some of the story but quality drops from the initial chapters.

I have placed a few reviews as I have progressed through the story. The writing quality and updates have continued to be excellent from the beginning until now. Everything else is somehow slowly devolving into some sort of adolescent power fantasy. The development at the start is good, nothing special. Like I said the whole acquisition of other powers made this story go way out there. The genie thing is way to far. The characters at that time are ok. For some reason the characters have devolved into unrealistic child like personalities. All of them. The world building is horrendous now as well. The world descriptions and story have come to essentially nothing. It seems as though the author has lost the story to numerous ideas, no real planning, and some cringe moments. I think more thought needs to be put into what exactly is trying to be achieved and how. Have some more tough moments, etc. At this point, the Mc can just get whatever whenever without any problems… and is still getting more powerful. Have struggle and character development. This will be where I stop as I don’t believe the story is repairable without a rewrite.

The quality of the writing and updates have been steady since the beginning. They are both really good. The issues start to come as the story develops and goes into the authors own stuff or changes. In the beginning it’s good but the development becomes a typical weird power fantasy where the MC gets everything and there is no challenge. The characters start off feeling close to what they should be. The further they make it into the story, the more they lose and devolve into the typical bland sides with no personalities; they are like 3 year olds running around. They lose their essence so to speak. The world background doesn’t really get original at all. There are some sequences where the background is directly taken from the moves but other parts need a lot more fleshing out. Some more descriptions of the overall world and surroundings would be nice. It’s still readable if you need something, just overall became a mediocre power fantasy with some weird things incorporated.

The writing quality and stability of updates has always been good since the beginning. Some parts of the development are bad and others are good. The current stark to Bucky thing is a little off and would cause Steve to mess up stark. That part just feels off with the characters. The amount of powers Peter is developing is a little too much on the extreme side. It’s nice to see interactions between x men and avengers… more development on that would probably be a good course. There are so many characters that can interact I feel are being under utilized. The world background needs a little more description and feels still to close to other ideas. Overall a recommended read.

Writing quality is good. Very easy to follow and very few errors. There are some but definitely can be chalked up to mistakes or not paying attention. The updates originally were non existent but have recently become decent. The story development, character design, and world background are all at the minimum. As writing continues these can all be expanded. The story does try to play off the consequences of killing a little to much and way to much internal conflict about it. Way more than personal experience or what I have seen with others. The characters have not had time to be fleshed out yet and the world is so far based to much on someone else’s ideas (the show). Hopefully the author gets time to build their own world as it deviates further. Has potential and worth a read to help develop it.

Stuck with the story for 195 chapters. The earlier chapters are better than the later. Writing quality and stability of updates have been great from the start. If anything, updates can be slowed to help plan the story development a little better. It gets way more chaotic and pulled in to many different directions with all sorts of stuff going on at once. The earlier sections had a clearer story with stuff happening behind the scenes. Now it’s all happening at once. The story does start out with trying to develop the MC and supporting characters. The character development devolves around chapter 70-80. They seem to all become slightly more on the dumb side for no reason. The interactions developed earlier also start to stagnate and appear to disappear. The MC supposedly goes through some personality growth but will immediately regress from whatever he did within 5 chapters. The original design for the MC powers was great but the growth is weirder later on because some things are just thrown in like the red ring. World background was good at the beginning with Al sorts of good descriptors but has severely declined. Still on ok read but later chapters leave much to be desired. Planning some things out and reducing the number of characters or events may help add in missing details.

The writing has great quality and very few mistakes here and there. It’s very easy to understand. Stability of updates changes from time to time, but that’s life. Story development and character design are there but they are lacking. The characters all appear to be very basic and not thought out. The storyline seems very unplanned and has no current route. The world is still being built and more characters are being introduced, again though, not much to them. Good for a quick read and when direction is determined could use a rewrite.

Writing quality and stability of updates are great up to when chapter 142 released. Story development is great at times and others feels rushed or poorly done to excite some individuals who like specific genres. Character design is a little confusing because sometimes the characters are really good and feel like people and other times they become basic like a skyrim npc. It’s almost like there is actually 2 authors. It could also be sometimes the author takes more time to write over others. The world background is ok. There are some descriptions of the environment but nothing really happens outside of the MC. Overall it’s definitely readable and I would recommend giving it a try. MC is a little annoying sometimes but you can read past it.

The writing quality is definitely great. Few mistakes are noticed and easy to understand. There are updates almost every day. The story development follows the movies sometimes to closely… in other-words, it’s just the movie storyline for the MCU. This isn’t bad but it’s not the authors story. The part that is the authors is the Spider-Man in the story. It feels decent at the start but as the story goes on it feels more rushed and starts leaving more holes. The character design sticks closely to original characters at times but others it’s missing that essence. An an example is Tony Stark, the author tries to maintain his playful curiosity and lack of thinking of consequences. It comes off as more like a person who was slow to develop rather than an irresponsible adult. The development around Spider-Man is a little odd but fits a business approach I guess. The world background is good and you see descriptions and events around the realms, BUT it’s not the authors world at this point, it’s the movies world background. Maybe try to incorporate more of the authors own places… they don’t all have to be movie scripted. Overall a decent story but is missing excitement and the wow factor.

Overall a very decent story. The writing quality is good. Maybe some small mistakes like missing a letter or something of that nature. It’s easily missed or overlooked. Stability of updates are kind of ok, but I would rather have quality so this is ok to have lower. Take your time to do it right. The story development is unique, I don’t want to give anything away so I can’t say to much. Maybe a little to much foreshadowing, which the author likes, and not sure how I feel about the direction with the formula. Characters are there, definitely not robotic and author is trying to make them all believable and different. Not many characters at this point in the story. The world building is at a good pace. The author describes and talks about different aspects of the world spaced out and with details. This helps significantly with readers understanding without the info dump feel. Good story but is not my style. Would recommend people try it.